Incomplete Melodies (Flashfic Challenge 17: Expanding From)

Oct 24, 2008 01:52

Title: Incomplete Melodies
Author: cmplctd
Word count: 959.
Concrit?: sure.
Pairing: Jaechun, Yoomin.
Rating: PG13; angst
Summary: Yoochun smiled. It's been three weeks since Changmin had seen a genuine smile. It's been 9 years since they first joined hands. And about 2 months ago, Yoochun admitted to another lover.

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c: expanding from, a: cmplctd

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cmplctd October 25 2008, 04:37:14 UTC
D: yeah..but chun realized too late. :[

no, he wasn't trying to hurt min. he never would. ^_^
ahh. blahh...

hehe, yay for part two? >_< hehe.

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kurogoma October 24 2008, 13:54:12 UTC
seemed that yoochun came to a sudden realization...too late?

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cmplctd October 25 2008, 04:39:07 UTC
yess, you're right.
*sighh, ohh chunniee...

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dream_hunt October 24 2008, 14:17:30 UTC
It. was. beautiful. especially. with. the. song.
Thank You.

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cmplctd October 25 2008, 04:39:49 UTC
aww, thank you.
my itunes was on shuffle while i was writing this and just so happened this song pops up and it was like *LIGHTBULB!*

:] hehe.

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jaedonluv October 24 2008, 15:13:58 UTC
Omo damn. TTT^TTT *cries a river*

Even though my heart belongs to Jae.. but.. does he really love Chun? or does he think Chun as a fuck buddy too?? TTTT^TTTT Changminnnn... gah, my heart.

This really isn't a good thing to read just after knowing about Min's, Su's and Chun's after debut first kisses. The song doesn't help either.

You don't love me anymore
You don't want me anymore
And there's a sign on your door
No vacancies, just emptiness
Without your love
I'm homeless

Gosh the lyrics..

Even though Chun realized it too late, I think he should break up with Jae and go back to Min.. =S Oh, my heart..

Wonderful piece. Beautiful song. Overall, well I couldn't find a word which exactly relates to what I feel about this so.. exquisite <3

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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cmplctd October 25 2008, 04:41:48 UTC
OMG, I READ ABOUT THEIR AFTER DEBUT KISSES and OMFGOSH. D: *heartbroken*

;_;
Junsu's such a nice boy, i want him to be my boyfriend. :[
hawww....

anyway. yesss. =]
this song was meant to be for this fic.

*Sighh..exquisite, hehe. thank you, dear ♥

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roughmetal2 October 24 2008, 15:53:13 UTC
uhm, i don't think it's too late for chun to go back to minnie since the latter has never really abandoned him. chunnie just need to let go of jaejoong and return to his bestfriend who loves him unconditionally.

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cmplctd October 25 2008, 04:42:38 UTC
yeah. i believe so too.
wait and see for part two of this :] coming soon.

*sighh...mistakes happen. :[

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