Masque in A minor (for drabble challenge 4: paint)

Mar 02, 2008 15:31

Title: Masque in A minor
Author: kallistei
Word count: 150 (drabble and a half)
Concrit?: Yes.
Character: Changmin (Yoochun/Changmin)

Masque in A minor )

c: paint, a: kallistei

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sleepish March 2 2008, 16:20:59 UTC
oh, nice. i like how you wrapped it up. ♥

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kallistei March 2 2008, 16:28:55 UTC
Thank you! I was worried it was a bit obscure. XD

(Also, you should sign onto AIM if you're not too busy. ;) )

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sleepish March 2 2008, 16:30:22 UTC
(give me fifteen minutes.)

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kallistei March 2 2008, 16:31:57 UTC
(Sure thing.)

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kelseypaige March 3 2008, 00:27:44 UTC
:):):) ♥

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kallistei March 3 2008, 10:02:43 UTC
Heeee. Thank you for the input, dear. &hearts

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ara_niey March 3 2008, 08:05:13 UTC
i love the title..unique.
and contents too of course!~^_^

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kallistei March 3 2008, 10:03:56 UTC
Thanks!

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dbdbyeah March 6 2008, 04:56:49 UTC
"Yoochun," Changmin says, reminding himself who it is, and Yoochun replies, "Changmin."

this was so heartfelt. aaaaaa. <3

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kallistei March 6 2008, 16:10:03 UTC
Ah, thank you!

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ianinna March 7 2008, 06:51:59 UTC
i like this a lot. A LOT. i like how i can let my brain let loose and caress the words like my fingers would trace lines on a painting.

the way you described the facepaint designs - it was so solid, so real, that i could practically feel the sharpness of the swirls and lines on the boys' faces.

i love how you ended it: behind the masks, the boys are who they are, and who they've always been.

I♥U.

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kallistei March 7 2008, 16:59:17 UTC
Aw, thank you! &hearts I love your comments, the thought you put into them.

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ianinna March 8 2008, 07:22:01 UTC
your writing does things to my brain. as you might have noticed, i like analyzing fics, and your work is just full of layers and color and life. it's so much fun going through the words, sifting through them and finding gold. ♥

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kallistei March 8 2008, 14:18:10 UTC
You are so good for my ego, dear. :D

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