i like this a lot. A LOT. i like how i can let my brain let loose and caress the words like my fingers would trace lines on a painting.
the way you described the facepaint designs - it was so solid, so real, that i could practically feel the sharpness of the swirls and lines on the boys' faces.
i love how you ended it: behind the masks, the boys are who they are, and who they've always been.
your writing does things to my brain. as you might have noticed, i like analyzing fics, and your work is just full of layers and color and life. it's so much fun going through the words, sifting through them and finding gold. ♥
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and contents too of course!~^_^
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this was so heartfelt. aaaaaa. <3
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the way you described the facepaint designs - it was so solid, so real, that i could practically feel the sharpness of the swirls and lines on the boys' faces.
i love how you ended it: behind the masks, the boys are who they are, and who they've always been.
I♥U.
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