Comments | dazzledfirestar: Fic: Courage (R, Fantastic Four, Johnny/Lyja/Peter) Part Two

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Fic: Courage (R, Fantastic Four, Johnny/Lyja/Peter) Part Two

Feb 01, 2012 14:34

Title: Courage (Part 2)
Fandom: Fantastic Four/Spider-Man
Pairing(s)/Characters: Johnny Storm/Lyja the Laserfist/Peter Parker, Ben Grimm, Reed Richards, Susan Storm-Richards
Word Count: 11, 381
Warnings: Brief violence, M/M sexual situations, PSTD related issues
Beta: ladydeathfaerie
Summary: when Johnny comes back from the Negative Zone, he needs all the support ( Read more... )

character: susan storm-richards/invisibl, fan fiction, character: ben grimm/thing, character: peter parker/spider-man, fandom: fantastic four, fandom: comics, fandom: marvel, character: johnny storm/human torch, challenge: polybigbang, character: reed richards/mr. fantastic, character: lyja the lazerfist

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ginevrasm February 3 2012, 02:18:36 UTC

Very nice. I really enjoyed this one. The way Lyja, Peter, and Johnny interacted with each other really felt loving and supportive without getting too schmaltzy.

Good work.

dazzledfirestar February 3 2012, 08:37:23 UTC

Thank you. I really didn't want to dip into the cheesy, over done romance type stuff with this so I'm glad that worked out. Thanks for taking the time to read it!

patronstofliars March 1 2012, 04:04:14 UTC

i've read this like three times since you posted it, and each time it gets more and more beautiful. i just LOVE how lyja and peter are working together for johnny in the first part, but by the end of part two they've got the whole triangle support system totally worked out. you've got me wanting more of these three (and i'm barely familiar with lyja, and not super familiar with johnny either [moreso with his ultimate version]). you've done such an amazing job of explaining these three without having to spell it out for everyone.

dazzledfirestar March 1 2012, 08:21:19 UTC

Wow! Thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it so much! I'm so glad the characters worked even without the (incredibly complicated) backstory stuff. And I'm so happy that the dynamics came through so well! Thank you so much for commenting!

strawberispring March 15 2012, 05:37:03 UTC

I finally got a chance to read this and, dang, I really enjoyed it.

You can always tell when a writer has a good grasp on the characters. Everything flows naturally and just really cohesively.

dazzledfirestar March 15 2012, 06:16:23 UTC

Hey, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for taking the time to read it. I'm so glad to hear it held together. :)

strawberispring March 15 2012, 16:01:02 UTC

Yes :o)

I meant to read it earlier but I never had enough time to properly read it and I wanted to properly read it.

dazzledfirestar March 17 2012, 20:12:57 UTC

Ah, I figured it would take some time for anyone to read this. lol But thank you for giving it the time! I'm glad it was worth it! :)

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