Nowhere near finished...

[dazyndara]

But I have to go away to a staff meeting, so I put this to you dear f'list on the offchance that someone is bored and feels like doing some proofreading :P
Caution, much of this has been written on little/no sleep so may not be optimally coherent :P

Comments

[labellementeuse]

I like it! Looking forward to seeing where you go with Accelerando.

[dazyndara]

Where did I go with Accelerando? I went posthuman on it's ass, that's where I went :P Well, it was kinda already there all by itself.

[slothphil]

I'll give it a once-over if I have time before the Halloween party.

[pythia]

Nice work. It all sounds good to me. :)

[xenogram]

Well, it makes a certain amount of sense at three in the morning. Not my major though, take with salt.

[anarchangel23]

What's the essay prompt? What are you trying to show?

[dazyndara]

There was no prompt :P You had to come up with your own topic. Yeah, I wasn't really sure what I was trying to show either :S

[anarchangel23]

Huh, interesting.

Didn't read all of the final version you just posted, but the intro and conclusion look good. :)