Originally written for this one comm, but it kinda spun off form what I intended it to be and became this! And I'm quite proud of it, actually.
I'm writing too many suggestive themes these days. xDD
Title: Thrice Damned
Pairing: Atobe Keigo x Shishido Ryou
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Ratingg: PG-13 (cursing, suggestive themes, nothing too explicit)
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Good job! x3 It was good! Interesting!
The letters made me laugh though. x3
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Is that...uhm...Haru wo Daiteita (no idea how to spell it) person in your icon? =D
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by the way, i've noticed that you seem to use the word 'lame' at least once in every ato/shi fic. coincidence?
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Oh, see, Shishido's fave phrase is 'geki dasa daze' right? So, that could mean 'uncool' or 'lame'. I stuck with lame for my fics. =D
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Oshitari amused me endlessly, more so in his sulky ignored state.
Very nice, I'd say the fic as a whole is rather perfect. I don't know what I can suggest to improve it. XD
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I actually think that no AtoShishi fic is perfect without a mention of SOME Oshitari somewhere. The tensai shouldn't be ignored, though! X3
Thank you~
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