Comments | dayofcaligula: [Fic] Eyeshield 21

dayofcaligula

[Fic] Eyeshield 21 - Light of the Night

Dec 25, 2012 13:43

A/N: Distortion of the routine thing, drabble-ish. Unsui is the only character I can associate this with due to his distinct way of life. If you don’t like angst, I suggest you go away. This is also a little, if not perceived as entirely, OOC, I’m afraid. I was heavily inspired by Frank Ocean’s Wiseman. I would suggest you listen to it. The pairing ( Read more... )

fanfic, es21, unsuikarin

Comments 2

icyblu24 January 3 2013, 11:18:45 UTC

I love the esoteric nature of this. Very subtle and angsty. I'm not a particular fan of this pairing but I can totally appreciate what you have done here. I don't think Unsui is OOC because this would be my guess as to what his reaction would be if he was asked to try something new.

dayofcaligula January 5 2013, 14:53:42 UTC

So that's the word, esoteric... I've been trying to define the approach I did to this, but I was at a loss and I don't know how to put it into a word really. Thankfully, you found the word for me!

Thanks, I do appreciate your feedback! Although I admit I felt a little uneasy about him mostly focused on being concerned about himself in the problem (and not really thinking and talking it out with Karin when it comes to her). So I edited it a bit so that I can at least portray that he also had ihis mind her part in the problem. That's more like him to me.