[Fic] Eyeshield 21 - Changes

[dayofcaligula]

Title: Changes
Author: dayofcaligula
Ratings/Warnings: PG13, drama and angst, Agon's rude mouth.
Pairing/Character(s): Unsui Kongo/Karin Koizumi, Agon Kongo
Fandom: Eyeshield 21
Disclaimer: I don't own Eyeshield 21 or any of its characters.
Summary: There are things that Agon would find hard to accept in life. One of them is change.
A/N: This story is done for glassdarkly. I did

Comments

[bifacial_ler]

there is something about the way you write them in this piece that moves me to telll that this is absolutely lovely and wonderfull and extremely fascinating in the you portray the Agon siblings dynamic. The Good, the Bad, the Beautiful, and you mastered it.

[dayofcaligula]

Thank you, I really do appreciate what you've said. And, I'm glad I'm not the only one thinking and hoping about their relationship turning this way in the end (and how it happened): towards positive progression.

[glassdarkly]

Not bad, I like how you made each character very believable, especially Agon being such an immature jerk lol Karin is so delicate and sweet. And including the sweet stories on the side of KarinXUnsui's relationship was a very nice touch. Nice work :)

[dayofcaligula]

Thank you, dear! I am amused about Agon missing Unsui (even just a bit).

[cherry_tiger]

Finally checking out your Unsui/Karin fics! I really love the way you develop Agon and Karin here... Agon obviously has a deep bond with his brother, and he's having such a hard time accepting Karin who seems to be getting in the way. And yet Karin continued to stand her ground, showing some really admirable strength that eventually wins over Agon. He's still going to be an ass to Karin, I see, but I think that's just how he is. Love it. ^^

[dayofcaligula]

Karin is choosing her battles and I don't think she's going to let go of Unsui just because she's most probably going to have an immature brother-in-law, hahaha!