Their Little Family

[daynah_bo]

Title:  Their Little Family
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Comments

[chloe1910]

Yes..I like the bittersweetness...angsty in the middle but happy ending in the end....XD

[daynah_bo]

Yep! I was listening to not so happy songs while writing this. But I did not want to end it on a depressing note--hence the happy love at the end. ^^ Glad you enjoyed it!

<3

[aeri__iijiri]

really bittersweet and the sweetest ending of all is here! ♥

i really like this ^^

[daynah_bo]

♥ Aw, thank you! ♥

The original version was supposed to end in somewhat the same way but more depressing things in between. I am glad you liked it! ^^ I have never written anything like this before and I was very afraid if I had gone about all wrong.

Thank you <3

[kattan69]

Initially I thought it would end up being sad but I like the ending changes...at least we see Jae and Yunho declaring their love..FINALLY!

[daynah_bo]

^^ I'm glad you liked it! The ending was originally sad (it was supposed to be have death--won't say who) But I decided that I just could not end things like that, so... I tweaked it! I am way more pleased with this outcome rather than the original intentions. <3

Thanks for commmenting.

[umachanxo]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

.. I can't write anything sensible!
AWWWW!

[daynah_bo]

It's okay. At least it was 'aw' worthy! ^^ Glad you enjoyed <3

[daynah_bo]

^^ Kisses make everything better! <3

Don't worry, "Dearly Beloved" will be updated soon :D

Thanks <3