Fast Car

[daynah_bo]

fast car [riding in cars with boys]
yoochun/junsu ♥ idek, romance? angst, possibly
Junsu just wants to run away with Yoochun and never look back, never come back
for

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[perfectstart]

/dies.

♥ ilu.

[daynah_bo]

aww, ♥ ilu2, bb~

[daynah_bo]

aw, thank you. i wanted it to seem as real as possible, and i'm happy you see it that way :)

*hugs* i'm sorry, i don't want to kill you, bb! ♥ thanks for reading&commenting

[justynapoland]

I'm crying my eyes out. It's heartbreakingly beautiful. So poetic, filled with mixed emotions. I broke when they were driving out of the city because on my player there was playing a song which fits this scene so, SO perfectly... (Ólafur Arnalds - Fok).
I could FEEL their "escape". Great job! ♥

[daynah_bo]

aww, bb *hugs* no tears, please! you'll make me sad ;-; i just listened to that song while reading; you're right, so fitting of the scene. thank you, honey ♥ i'm happy to have written something you enjoyed :)

[miss2e]

so wonderfully written =D!! I ALWAYS look forward to reading whatever you write so please don't ever stop =p!

[daynah_bo]

aw ♥ thank you, bb! i'm happy to have pleased you so; enough to make you want to read whatever i write at least :) i'll try my best to keep the stories coming ♥

[carolzofbellz]

what do you mean, "maybe this is isn't too terrible?"
this is absolutely perfect, honey, simply gorgeous. i envy my slave's style of writing, so much. <3 it's beautiful and i'm very proud of you for making me feel like i just awoke from the dead. ;___; well done~ *hugs*

your junsu got me good. i feel for them, wanting to keep their relationship hidden from the other band members and escaping from home to make love. that made my heart shatter, but the ending immediately patched it up. the last line is love. <333

keep up with the good work, dear. ^^

[daynah_bo]

haha, well, i thought it was bad ;-;
aw, you envy my writing style? but i prefer yours a whole lot more, master ♥ *hugs back*

yeah, secret relationships have to hurt - especially one such as theirs. the last line is my favorite part, so i'm happy you liked it! ♥ ♥ ♥

thank you, bb! i'll try my best to please you (slave♥'smaster)