Fic: The Burden of Silence

Sep 05, 2011 22:21

Title: The Burden of Silence
Author: Daylyn
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Rating: R (FRM)
Pairing: Hotch/Reid
Word Count: ~ 1,700
Disclaimer: All characters belong to their copyright holders. No profit is intended.

Summary: Hotch silently watches his team, and his lover, grieve.

Author’s Note: SPOILERS for Episode 6.18, “Lauren” specifically and ( Read more... )

fandom: criminal minds, fanfic, universe: five dinners, pairing: hotch/reid

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kuriadalmatia September 6 2011, 22:02:13 UTC
I loved this for so many reasons. And I love the details that you put into it. //hugs//

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daylyn September 7 2011, 06:14:07 UTC
Thank you for your wonderful comments. You definitely made the fic better. *squishy hugs*

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jomk September 7 2011, 01:10:36 UTC
This made me ache for all the right reasons. So beautifully thought out and expressed. Hotch's situation cried out for this kind of depth - it won't be played on the screen, I don't think (well, definitely not the H/R stuff) but the layers. That would take several Hotch episodes with no crime to solve. So thank you for doing it for them. Truly heartbreaking.

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daylyn September 7 2011, 06:17:39 UTC
Thank you, my dear. I'm thrilled you like this. I know we won't see this onscreen, but I too think that Hotch would have a lot of regrets about what he has to do, even if he knows its right. It's going to impact the whole team (and I'd love to see them take on Jack waiting for Haley, but I really don't think they will -- of course, I'd love to see them do H/R stuff too... but I'll just have to do that myself, won't I?) Thank you, as always, for your kind words and encouragement.

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ice_ziggee September 7 2011, 09:51:06 UTC
This is beautiful and hearwarming and sad.

I´m so glad to see another fic in this verse and I hope you write some more.

Amazing writing.

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daylyn September 7 2011, 14:45:35 UTC
Thank you so much. I really appreciate that. So glad you liked it.

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cmali September 8 2011, 03:40:33 UTC
Day...

I've missed you so. And this? This is heartbreaking. It is raw and screaming foul, and it physically hurts me to read. Because when all is said and done, when the dust settles and EM is back, no one will be the same person they were before. I hope the shift is not too great to reinforce...

Day...

You are loved.

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daylyn September 9 2011, 06:12:00 UTC
Oh sweetie, thank you so, so much. You totally made my day. I'm definitely interested to see what happens in the series... and how that will affect my little 'verse. I'm so thrilled you liked this Thank you again.

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nevcolleil September 23 2011, 00:07:27 UTC
This is really great - so full of emotion. I'd like to read something from after the truth is out.

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daylyn October 1 2011, 04:19:57 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked this. I have some ideas for what happens next, especially after the past episode. I'll get to it, soon(ish).

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