Fic: Respite

Aug 01, 2010 04:47

Title: Respite
Author: Daylyn
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Rating: NC- 17 (FRAO)…
Pairing: Hotch/Reid
Word Count: ~ 3,350
Warnings: Pure smut. PWP. A little bit of angst and melancholia but, really, just smut.
Disclaimer: All characters belong to their copyright holders. No profit is intended.

Summary: During the midst of a difficult case, Aaron ( Read more... )

fandom: criminal minds, fanfic, universe: five dinners, pairing: hotch/reid

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bowie28 August 1 2010, 19:12:06 UTC
Arron's doubt was breaking my heart. Then you mended it with their quiet, hot, beautiful love-making.

You know I love you. <3

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daylyn August 1 2010, 20:03:21 UTC
*hugs* You totally made my day. Thank you. I'm so glad you liked this.

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ebonyfeather August 1 2010, 19:12:25 UTC
This was great- angsty yet sweet.

Loved it.

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daylyn August 1 2010, 20:03:48 UTC
Thank you! Angsty fluff -- that's me.

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resolucidity August 1 2010, 19:56:38 UTC
Between this and kuriadalmatia's fic, I am one happy H/R shipper/fangirl today!

I think you do quite well with the smut, but this fic was much more than just that. It's nice to see Hotch break a rule (even if it is self-imposed) once in a while.

This was nicely written and I am looking forward to the continuation of the series. Thanks for making my day!! Great job!!

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daylyn August 1 2010, 20:07:13 UTC
Thank you! Oh, and I totally squeed when I saw that kuriadalmatia had updated "Trigger and Ties". I'm such a fangirl too and I absolutely love H/R (um... in case it wasn't obvious). And I'm thrilled you liked my latest installment. I have ideas for more stories... so... if I can get RL to stop kicking me in the ass, I'll write some more.

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resolucidity August 1 2010, 21:00:51 UTC
Oh, I can totally relate to the RL thing. I have an H/R tag to Amplification that I've been writing since the episode aired over a year ago! *headdesk*

But I'm glad to hear that more are coming. I hope RL gets both legs amputated. *g*

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daylyn August 1 2010, 21:59:15 UTC
I have an H/R tag to Amplification that I've been writing since the episode aired over a year ago! *headdesk*.

Tell me about it. I have a Holmes/Watson WWI era WIP that I last updated in June 2009. I have the last chapter all planned out... in my head. But it just hasn't made it to a computer screen yet. *sigh* I'm also working on a Sherlock Holmes/Criminal Minds Epic Crossover which essentially has Hotch and Reid (established relationship) being sent back in time due to an explosion caused by a mad scientist, Holmes and Watson pre-slash, the hunt for Jack the Ripper, and modern day intrigue with the BAU team at the U.S. Embassy in London. I've written over 13,000 words so far but have kind of hit a wall. I have the whole thing planned... in my head. Damn you, RL, damn you.

But I can't wait to read your H/R Amplification tag if you ever get it finished. No pressure though...

I hope RL gets both legs amputated.

That is the best thought EVAR!

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jomk August 1 2010, 21:02:07 UTC
Oh, this was lovely. Hot and deep and sad and sweet. Not to mention you touched on one of my favorite kinks, so that's always a plus, but as always, it's the emotions that bring the most joy. Wonderful.

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daylyn August 1 2010, 22:01:23 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, it's one of my favorite kinks too. But my main goal is to try to explore the emotional connection between them. I'm so glad that comes through.

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martina66 August 2 2010, 00:25:36 UTC
Yeah, loved this.........hope you have many more stories of these 2 to come...love how you see them together.............

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daylyn August 2 2010, 01:27:52 UTC
Thank you! I keep having inspiration so... more stories (at some point). Glad you liked this and the way I portray them. That's a great compliment.

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martina66 August 2 2010, 02:24:53 UTC
Seriously, with all the writers out there, you are by far the best, you capture them beautifully and have just the right amount of balance between friendship, love, sexual attraction and humour............kudos to you.............love your work and always smile when I see you have posted something new, off to re-read your latest...............:))

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daylyn August 2 2010, 05:17:00 UTC
Thank you so much. Your comment seriously made my day.

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