Harry, you have an excellent grasp on descriptions and internals. As far as editing goes, I think if you'd go in and cut back on some of your adjectives you'd find yourself in great shape. I truly wish I had such a gift for descriptions like you do.
I hope you are not just saying that to amke me feel better [because it totally did and I wanted some good words here and there to help me unblock]. And I lack the ability to convey images without adjectives and more with knowns and more powerful verbs... That is why adjectives come along so often, but we shall see.
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