Mixed With the Lightning of Slaughter [ch. 10]

[dayadhvam_triad]

Comments

[helike]

Baa-chan’s going to be angry at us too, Sakura-chan, so I don’t think it matters whether or not fuzzy eyebrows comes with us

Naruto knows Tsunade better than anybody could think, huh? ^^;;

Good job, honey :)

[dayadhvam_triad]

Yeah, Naruto and Tsunade have a pretty good idea of each other. They know what to expect. :)

Thank you! *glomps*

[acaida]

I love the parts in italics, the style that you use and the way you put it together. That ending part with Sasuke was probably my favourite part of the chapter.

I think you handled Lee very well. He is a hard character to write, even though you wouldn't think at first.

Great job and thanks for the update!!! Can't wait for the next chapter ♥

[dayadhvam_triad]

I'm so glad you liked this! :) I liked writing the end part with Sasuke too, contrasting the --and he screams phrase in the memories with the corresponding one in real-time. :P

I'm relieved. I'm always a little afraid my Lee will turn out one-dimensional, because it's very hard for me to get a grasp on the way he acts. :)

Thank you very much! ♥

[fujiko1601]

Nice work with Karin. The future parts were particularly interesting. Now I want to know what happened in the future more than what happens now.

Now there are seven genin chasing down the Uchiha. XD

[dayadhvam_triad]

Thanks! I think Karin can be quite ruthless when she wants to. And some information on the future will be seen soon enough. ;)

Tsunade is very much unamused. Seven indeed. XD Thanks for commenting. :)

[fujiko1601]

She'd better. Kishimoto already has a great deal of explaining to do regarding the way he treats female characters.

[dayadhvam_triad]

Quite. It's not so much that he's sexist, it's just that he... doesn't seem to realize the slant he's doing. Karin's reaction to the... bite in the last chapter certainly didn't do much. >_>