Ha... like how it changes in comparison to the original story (manga) :) I can't wait to see more. And seems that you find the way round the problem with writing fighting scenes :D
But you know... you used a forbidden word - "laughing". Guess what came to my mind immediately? XDD;
I'm glad you liked it! :D I attribute the fight scene to that moment of clarity during the writing streak; otherwise I'd probably still be stuck on it.
Laughing? >_> "YOU ARE MY LIGHT! YOU ARE MY SPARE! COOOOOME TO MEEEE, MY BROTHER!!!!!!!" XP XP XP I can't even begin to imagine what you thought of. XP
Let's say that every time I see word "laughing" I see THAT face and either I'm starting smirking or I feel like laughing hysterically ^^; I can't erase that picture from my mind >_>;
Oh, I like how you made it different from the original. It was also cool how Sasuke kept reaching for his sword and used Chidori Nagashi. He's definitely has some explaining to do, as you said.
The fight was awesome! They're always the hardest thing to write, at least I think so. But you did a great job. (everyone always makes it look so easy -sigh-). Can't wait for the next chapter~
I'm glad you liked the fight! :) It was hard to write, but then two nights ago I had a writing streak at around midnight and managed to make it work. :D Thank you for commenting, as always!--I really, really appreciate it a lot. :)
I'm so relieved you like the fight scene! :) Since my writing's usually pretty introspective, I was like @_@ at the fight scene. XP But I'm glad it worked out in the end. Thanks for commenting! <3 :)
Oh, great chapter! I think you wrote the fight scene very well! I love how Sasuke is so dazed that he actually says what's on his mind for once. I can't wait until he realises what's going on and can put things to rights! I hope he puts it together before the Sound 4 show up!!!
Heya! Sorry this is totally unrelated, I haven't caught up on your fic yet :/ BUT I thought you'd be happy to find that Red Crow put up the original version of Second Chances on her livejournal!!! WOOT!
Oh, take your time with the fic, I understand real life constraints. :D But oh man, I didn't know Red Crow had an lj! Thanks for the link! ^^ (Also, I noticed you posted another chapter for your fic, so does that mean you've finished editing the earlier ones? :))
No, I haven't finished editing yet... I figured the folks who have been waiting patiently for another chapter would start getting antsy, ROFL.
I am honestly rather scared that you're just not gonna dig where my story goes :( BUT, I will toughen up and take whatever you have to say!
After I finish up the stupidy stupid work thing tomorrow (ugh, I have to be at the airport @ 5:30am, just SHOOT ME) I will be able to work on the edits more!
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But you know... you used a forbidden word - "laughing". Guess what came to my mind immediately? XDD;
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Laughing? >_> "YOU ARE MY LIGHT! YOU ARE MY SPARE! COOOOOME TO MEEEE, MY BROTHER!!!!!!!" XP XP XP I can't even begin to imagine what you thought of. XP
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The fight was awesome! They're always the hardest thing to write, at least I think so. But you did a great job. (everyone always makes it look so easy -sigh-). Can't wait for the next chapter~
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http://clockwork-hat.livejournal.com/
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I am honestly rather scared that you're just not gonna dig where my story goes :( BUT, I will toughen up and take whatever you have to say!
After I finish up the stupidy stupid work thing tomorrow (ugh, I have to be at the airport @ 5:30am, just SHOOT ME) I will be able to work on the edits more!
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5:30 am, @_@ owwww, too early. o_O
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