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day_eight

Secret Worth Keeping

Mar 23, 2008 06:04

Title: Secret Worth Keeping
Pairing: Shuuhei/Kira
Prompt: Secret - from silverharmony
Rating: NC-17 (kinda?)
Warning: Yaoi
Disclaimer: I don't own Shuuhei or Kira, and they're definitely over the age of 18.

( It's a game... one he could play all night... )

fanfic

Comments 33

nnoi March 23 2008, 13:20:07 UTC

Wow I love this!!!!

day_eight March 23 2008, 19:54:55 UTC

Thank you!!!

silverharmony March 23 2008, 14:00:01 UTC

Wow, that was quick! XD

I really really love this ♥ you did so well with the prompt. I could really feel the intimacy and the secretiveness the whole way through. And I know, I'm such a sap - the 'In the quiet of this room, in this treasured privacy - they are no one's but each other's' line killed me, I love it so much. The whole thing was great.

Thank you for writing and sharing this! *loves* ♥ (Maybe you should post to shuukira? ;D)

day_eight March 23 2008, 19:56:30 UTC

I'm sooo glad that you liked it!!!

I'll definitely post to shuukira. I was just so tired when I finished these last night that I went straight to bed afterwards!

♥ Thank you for the wonderful prompt~

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day_eight March 23 2008, 20:10:55 UTC

Damn. You. And. That. Icon.

o________o

*sigh*

Cam we wrote now? Or I could just sit here and stare at your icon and you can write me pretties? *nodnodnod*

annieroo2 March 24 2008, 05:49:12 UTC

OH I love this pairing, it is so sweet. You did such a fabulous job with it too. The subtle looks and touches in public used to ratchet up the tension and lust for when they are alone. Then they revel in each other.

Very sexy and very sweet. =D

day_eight March 24 2008, 07:38:56 UTC

Thank you! I don't write them very often... I don't know if I've ever written anything with Shuu before, actually. 0.o

But I find him incredibly sexy *points to layout* and him and Kira together is just too sweet. XD

annieroo2 March 24 2008, 23:53:23 UTC

Yeah whenever I think of ShuuKira the first thing that always comes to mind is like a field full of daisies sweet. I know that sounds completely dorky but it's true.

fayedoll March 24 2008, 21:46:45 UTC

*tries to look away from Shuu on the right*

Good writers make new OTPs (at least for me, I've got no creativity so I flow with other people's brilliant ideas on pairings). And this was very well written <3!

day_eight March 24 2008, 22:36:01 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it. (And yeah, every time I look at Shuu on the right, I end up getting stuck for at least five minutes! xD)