The Craving

Dec 22, 2007 05:36

Written for nekokazuki, for the bleach_bdsm Secret Santa Fic Exchange.

Title: The Craving
Pairing: Zangetsu/Shirosaki/Ichigo
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Yaoi, sex, bondage
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite owns Bleach and its Characters.  All characters are intended to be over the age of 18.

He arches his back and bites his lip, pressing into the grip of those hands as they push and pull him in ten different directions. )

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shizukashadow December 22 2007, 12:41:40 UTC
I'll be over here, next to this puddle, that once was my brain. You're descriptions were too hot for it, creating such a vivid image that you completely liquefied it. X3

Oh, and my heart is waaay over there. It did a nice swoon outta my chest over all the delicious emotions you conveyed about these three. The mix of pain and pleasure, force and caress, my silly fangirl heart just couldn't take it anymore. ♥

Yeah, basically I loved it~!
^^; I blame silly review on the fact its 4AM where I am, and I should be sleeping.

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day_eight December 22 2007, 12:50:51 UTC
OMG! Thank you so much! Your opinion on this was one of the ones I was looking forward to the most, because I adore your Ichi and think you're an awesome writer.

I really appreciate how you listened to me ramble about this and helped me out the other day. I know this isn't anything like what we had been talking about, but I just got it in my head and wrote it out... which is usually how my best work gets done. I'm sooooo glad you liked it!

*scoops up puddle as best as she can* Umm... you might need this?

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antha_aryn December 22 2007, 14:51:26 UTC
::Mega-nosebleed::

Antha ---> in desperate need of blood transfusion X.x

Vivid imagery and a very delicious image at that.

Come hither, lovely fic, and join my memories! ♥

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day_eight December 22 2007, 21:55:17 UTC
Aww! Thanks so much~ I'm so glad you liked it!

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gogo_ergo_sum December 23 2007, 17:26:13 UTC
ICON DO WANT!!!

xoxo

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day_eight December 22 2007, 21:57:39 UTC
Ohhhhh~ I'm really, really, really glad that you liked it. I felt kind of bad that you ended up with me, the person who never wrote a threesome, writing your request. Hopefully I did it some justice and that it's an acceptable Christmas gift. <3

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gogo_ergo_sum December 24 2007, 05:51:52 UTC
Silly...you didn't your name all over the post? XDD

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nnoi December 22 2007, 16:08:47 UTC
Wow....thats all I am really say right now.....wow

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day_eight December 22 2007, 21:59:44 UTC
I hope that's a good wow! I was sooo scared that this would be complete crap, seeing as I'm a complete novice at threesomes, bondage, and this pairing. Thanks so much for reading/commenting! <3

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nnoi December 22 2007, 23:59:41 UTC
definatly a good wow! that was incredible!

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day_eight December 23 2007, 00:07:01 UTC
*beams* Thank you~ (and omg I adore your icon)

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flowerofsin December 22 2007, 16:14:27 UTC
I love threesomes featuring these guys, so this fic hit all the right buttons. I'm basically echoing everyone else, but this was a very steamy fic. Loved it.

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day_eight December 22 2007, 22:01:25 UTC
Yay! I've read a lot of fics about these three, and I'm not sure mine can rival some of the others, but I'm glad that people enjoyed it. Soooo glad you read and liked!

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