Conflicting Glances - Chapter 12

May 21, 2007 19:34

Well, here it is. The final chapter of Conflicting Glances. It almost didn't get here. I was ready to post it on Thursday night, and then somehow my file disappeared, and I didn't get a chance to rewrite it until today. Oh well ( Read more... )

jack/chloe, 24, glances, fic

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glorylinnemann May 21 2007, 19:03:44 UTC
*sniff*...Well, it's over, but I can't pout too much. Awesome, awesome, awesome ending. So incredibly sweet without being the least bit cheesy. Lots of great lines ("an army of Jack Bauers" lol). I believe I may have said this before, but this is one of my all-time favorite fics, and I'm so glad we got a happy, perfectly written ending. *applauds*

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day_dream_girl1 May 21 2007, 19:14:54 UTC
That's so nice of you to say!! I was a little concerned about it being cheesy, but I was quite happy with the end result. And I have to tell you, the 'army of Jack Bauers' line...I swear I kind of zoned out for ten minutes after writing it, thinking of what it would be like to have an army of Jack Bauers....it was a nice dream ;p

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glorylinnemann May 21 2007, 19:35:15 UTC
I MUST SNAG YOUR ICON. That is brilliant!

And wow, I wish I came up with great lines by zoning out. My, my. :D

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day_dream_girl1 May 22 2007, 12:44:24 UTC
I love that icon! It was made by janaine It's so funny!

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failegaidin May 21 2007, 19:06:02 UTC
Wonderful end to a wonderful story. If only Jack Bauer would crash through my door one night!

Loved it!

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day_dream_girl1 May 21 2007, 19:16:01 UTC
Thank you! (Still waiting impatiently for Unexpected Gift....) OMG what would you do if Jack Bauer came crashing through your door!! Now you're just going to get me dreaming again....

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failegaidin May 21 2007, 19:20:53 UTC
Writing chapter 3, I promise!

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ktswaz May 21 2007, 19:30:00 UTC
“In boxers?”
Now that is a sight I would love to see Jack/Kiefer in!!

an army of Jack Bauers. I love this line!
I also agree with Tessa and glory!!!

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day_dream_girl1 May 22 2007, 12:47:04 UTC
Thank you! What would you do with an army of Jack Bauers?! The possiblities are endless ;p

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day_dream_girl1 May 22 2007, 12:48:16 UTC
Thank you! And I wouldn't mind trading places with Chloe in this story ;p

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day_dream_girl1 May 22 2007, 12:48:52 UTC
Thank you :)

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