New Fic: Seattle Interlude

[day_dream_girl1]

My response to the Chlack Cliche Ficathon. My cliche was - "One of them getting soaking wet and the other must use body heat to keep them from getting hypothermia." This is what I came up with :)

Comments

[day_dream_girl1]

Thanks. I <3 inappropriate Chloe too, that's when she's at her best ;D

[failegaidin]

“You have no idea who you are to me,” he whispered gruffly in her ear, feeling her shivering beneath him.

Loved this. And I loved Chloe's bluntness: “So, do you think we should have sex now?”

“What?” his shocked face almost made her smile, but she quelled the urge and shrugged instead.

“Well, it’s quite clear at least one part of you wouldn’t object, and I haven’t had sex in a while.”

Great job!

[day_dream_girl1]

Thank you so much!

[grackles]

Those were my favorite parts of the story too! I'm glad to be part of this fandom when I find stories like this. Thanks!

[day_dream_girl1]

I'm glad you like the story :)

[sej_1986]

I really loved this, all of it! Although I did especially like the bit where Chloe was memorising what it was like to be in bed with Jack- i think that's what I would be doing too :D

[day_dream_girl1]

If I was in bed with Jack Bauer, I don't think my brain would be functioning enough to memorise anything. Lol!

[sparky_girl82]

I think I strongly agree with Sej, I would be memorizing every little thing! Great job on the fic! Totally and completely loved it!

[day_dream_girl1]

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it!

[glorylinnemann]

*squeals* Yay! This is my favorite timeframe for them, and this was so awesome. I love your writing, and bascially, I just can't rave enough. :D

[day_dream_girl1]

I'm glad you like it, your enthusiasm always makes me smile ;D I know you posted a fic recently and I still have to read it. I'm so behind on my fic reading it makes me sad! But I'm still glad you liked my little story!