I find it a tad difficult to believe that Chloe would just sit back in CTU doing nothing, while Jack's girlfriend who has no experience at all would spend nearly two years searching for him in a foreign country.
I didn't realise Chloe was the one to tell Jack that Audrey looked for him on her own. And I have to admit, I'd be somewhat skeptical that even the non Chlack fan could see Chloe not doing everything she could to find Jack. I'm glad you liked the story:)
Wow, this was absolutely amazing! And sad. :( I was hoping someone would write a fanfic that works Chloe into this storyline, and I think you did it perfectly. Everybody is in-character and you did justice to the both Audrey and Chloe. And yay Chase! :D I especially like the way you handled Buchanan and the justification you gave for him not firing Chloe. It's heartwrenching but compelling.
Thank you very much! I miss Chase, and I like to use him from time to time. I thought Buchanon might be a bit too angry, but I think he'd be disappointed with Chloe, and I think his reaction in the first ep of season 6 shows he can shout as well as anyone! ;)
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Great stuff! Some of your best I'd say. :)
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