Blue Skies, Prompt #1: For a Little Blue Girl (X-Men)

Jul 15, 2011 17:05

Title: For a Little Blue Girl
Author: mrstater
Prompt: #1: I was blue, just as blue as I could be / Ev'ry day was a cloudy day for me / Then good luck came a-knocking at my door / Skies were gray but they're not gray anymore ("Blue Skies" by Irving Berlin)
Fandom: X-Men: First Class
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Raven Darkholme, Charles Xavier
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blue skies: prompt 1, author: mrstater, fandom: x-men

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margerydaw_s2 July 15 2011, 22:09:47 UTC
This is very sweet =) Loved the Oz references.

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mrstater July 16 2011, 04:42:40 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm very glad you think the Oz references worked; I though it was a movie I thought every little girl Raven's age would have seen and think of from time to time, but I wasn't sure it really fit the theme outside my head!

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margerydaw_s2 July 16 2011, 04:44:07 UTC
It certainly worked for me.

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synnerxx July 15 2011, 22:14:59 UTC
Very sweet! Loved the ending. :)

Very nice color imagery too.

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mrstater July 16 2011, 04:44:06 UTC
Since I took the "I was blue, just as blue as I could be" thing pretty literally, I wanted to put a little spin on it, as well. I'm glad you think the imagery worked. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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shimotsuki July 15 2011, 22:16:10 UTC
Once upon a time blue was her favorite color, but on the streets it's not a color at all.

Really like that twist on 'blue,' and really like the drabble for the way it paints loneliness and isolation, but then a new kind of homecoming.

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mrstater July 16 2011, 04:45:39 UTC
Whew! I was worried that idea really wouldn't translate, especially as I'd been quite literal with the idea of Raven physically being blue. Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely comment. :)

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mollywheezy July 15 2011, 22:17:38 UTC
Beautiful imagery. I particularly enjoyed Charles as a brother. Great job!

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mrstater July 16 2011, 04:49:15 UTC
Thank you! I loved the sibling dynamic between Charles and Raven in First Class, and I'm really pleased you think I've captured that idea here.

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mrstater July 16 2011, 04:49:37 UTC
Thank you!

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