April Showers Drabblethon Prompt 23
Title: Flooding
Author: pukajen
Prompt: Prompt 23
Fandom: Iron Man, IM2
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Tony/Pepper
Genre: Humor
Rating & Warnings: G
Word Count: 1,000
Summary: “I’ve never been more serious about anything in my life.” He looks at me in earnest now, peeling the sunglasses from his face.
( Flooding )
Author: pukajen
Prompt: Prompt 23
Fandom: Iron Man, IM2
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Tony/Pepper
Genre: Humor
Rating & Warnings: G
Word Count: 1,000
Summary: “I’ve never been more serious about anything in my life.” He looks at me in earnest now, peeling the sunglasses from his face.
( Flooding )
Comments 2
I like your attention to detail -- all the little things she sees and feels and all the different thoughts going through her mind.
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When I read, I really enjoy the little details, though there are some authors who bog everything down with them. It's a really fine line I try very hard to walk along. Thanks for letting me know it worked for you.
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