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Midwinter Prompt #8: Pyre (ASOIAF)

Jan 23, 2012 15:57

Title: Pyre
Author: fifmeister
Prompt: #8, picture of fire
Fandom: ASOIAF
Characters/Pairings: Jorah, hints of Dany/Jorah
Rating: PG
Word Count: 250
Summary: As the longest night of his life wears on, Jorah keeps watch ( Read more... )

fandom: a song of ice and fire, author: fifmeister, midwinter: prompt 8

Comments 5

phoenikxs January 23 2012, 21:41:38 UTC

Wow. I love this. And the ending is perfect! I'm a sucker for the Mormont words :)

mrstater January 23 2012, 22:42:09 UTC

Mormont words are the best words!

fifmeister January 24 2012, 00:29:45 UTC

Thanks! I'm happy you liked it, especially the ending. I think I wrote like five different endings before I finally settled on that one!

mrstater January 23 2012, 22:41:53 UTC

Just the other day I was thinking about there not being any fics about Jorah as Dany's in the fire! Were you reading my mind or something?

I love the parallel you drew between them there in the middle about impulsive, youthful foolishness. They're alike in so many ways, I think, though this one isn't one I'd thought about. Beautifully done.

And, of course, the kiss!

Well done.

fifmeister January 24 2012, 00:32:24 UTC

Yeah, when the idea popped into my head, I realized that I couldn't recall ever seeing any fics about this! Which I definitely found surprising, because it's such an opportunity for angst. ;) Thanks so much for the lovely comment!