Blue Skies Prompt 25: Hold the Moment (Tangled)

[must_fear_harpy]

Title: Hold the Moment
Author: must_fear_harpy
Prompt: Prompt 25: Genius Next Door
Fandom: Tangled
Characters: Eugene/Rapunzel
Ratings: T
Word Count: 304
Summary: Eugene can hold her flowers for her. He can also hold his breath.

Comments

[just_a_dram]

Oh, I love this.

This happens probably to be my favorite moment in the movie. It visually speaks volumes, and you've put words and feelings to that image so very adeptly.

[mrstater]

*sigh* That scene is one of the loveliest romantic Disney moments, and you've captured Eugene's state of mind perfectly. Love this!

[bookdragon01]

Aww. What a beautiful moment.

[blevins]

Ffffft those last three lines were as close as I've come to perfection in a while.

[yuenmei]

I like your idea of how the flowers got in his hand, and I like how conscious Eugene is of time passing in this. It doesn't seem like something that's struck him more before.