Title: Invulnerable
Author:
fifmeisterPrompt: #21 - storm
Fandom: A Song of Ice and Fire
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Jorah Mormont, Daenerys Targaryen, hints of Dany/Jorah
Genre: Drama
Rating & Warnings: PG. Spoilers for A Storm of Swords.
Word Count: 362
Summary: The weather is far from calm, and so is Ser Jorah.
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And I'm so glad you did, because the prompt made me think of Dany, but I couldn't come up with anything for her!
What I love about this is how you've brought out the age difference so well--she really seems like a girl and he seems like...a man of experience. And that doesn't come out in a creepy way at all, it just shows how much Dany has to learn and how much Jorah has learned (and therefore how much he has to offer her).
You've also brought out his longing for her so delicately; my stomach drops for him there at the end when Dany kisses him and runs off, oblivious.
Just lovely. I hope this is the beginning if many more. :)
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I'm glad that the age difference came across without being creepy! I've just started reading Storm of Swords, and it struck me that in some parts Dany seems to be acting a bit more like a stubborn teenager than in the previous books, when she really had to be mature beyond her years, so that was how I tried to portray her here.
Alas, poor Jorah...but hopefully she'll come around eventually. ;)
Thank you so much for the lovely comment!
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Does this mean you've officially said the good ship Jonerys? (Erm, I don't know what abbreviation this pairing should get. Jony?)
How about The Kiss?
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How about The Kiss?
I actually just got to that part! I loved how Dany was all "You shouldn't have done that!" even though she totally kissed him back. Conflicted romances, how I love them. XD
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You capture his desire quite nicely.
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The world needs more Dany/Jorah fic and yours was just the perfect amount of bittersweet and utterly in character.
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