Blue Skies, Prompt #13: When You Would Rather Wake (AiW)

[just_a_dram]

 

Comments

[yappichick]

Dude, this was downright painful (in a good angsty fic kind of way). I'm going to go eat a bar of chocolate now. LOL

(Though I absolutely love the zebra line!)

[just_a_dram]

I know...what the heck did I do? For some reason all I want to do is write sad stuff for AiW and happy stuff for Tangled.

You deserve your chocolate for getting through and then having angst greet you. :)

I had to throw in the zebra bit to lighten the mood!

[just_a_dram]

I'm sort of interested in a--Alice never goes back to Underland--story, but I'm fairly certain I'm the only masochist who would want to read that! Let alone write it. I just like the idea of Alice having to make a life for herself in this world and what that would mean.

[just_a_dram]

Thanks very much! That's what I was going for.

[hereswith]

There was no way back. All doors were shut to her. Ouch. That was incredibly sad. But well-written, and I too really liked the bit about the zebra!

[just_a_dram]

Okay, I was *really* in a mood! For some reason I like bucking the trend and have Alice not return...even though I find that sad as well. Thanks for reading and commenting, my dear.

[anonymous_plume]

oh, this was heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time. You see, Alice?! This is why you should have stayed I'M JUST SAYING YOU COULD HAVE DONE GREAT THINGS THERE TOO. >< Pardon.

Gorgeous as ever, which is expected of you (no pressure) and as others have said, the mythical zebra bit was adorable and funny.

also, OMG you combined Coldplay with Alice i loveyouforever.

[just_a_dram]

You know, currently I am more interested in exploring if Alice doesn't go back than if she does. It's sad, but for some reason I find it compelling. Although, no one probably wants to read about a Hatter-less Alice in London. This little angsty bit is probably the limit! :)

I had to put some lighthearted moments like the zebra in there so it wasn't all wah-wah-wah. I'm glad you liked it.

Coldplay ftw!

[anonymous_plume]

what if you did almost alll angst and then a happy ending at the 11th hour??

that could be very intriguing...

[just_a_dram]

In my fic idea...he's dead. I'm sort of laughing at how mean I am.