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dawncrow

Fic: When You Hold A Flame (Vol 2: Track 4)

Jan 24, 2011 01:03

Series: When You Hold A Flame
Title: Wicked Game
Pairing,Character(s): Dave Karofsky/Kurt Hummel, Mercedes Jones
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,340
Spoilers: Specific through 2x07. Through 2x08, AU after that (Series)
Warnings: One instance of homophobic language, sexuality.
Previous Chapters: HERE
Summary: Karofsky’s timing could not have been more ( Read more... )

glee, kurtofsky, fic, when you hold a flame

Comments 11

separatrix January 24 2011, 07:08:32 UTC

I liked the addition of the photo album, and Kurt's memories. It's funny how certain he is that he will not find love with Davey, but he does not realize that sometimes the heart wants what it wants, and it appears that Kurt's subconscious self is already aware of this.:)

dawncrow January 26 2011, 06:23:11 UTC

Yeah, it's not wise to write off one's subconscious. Perhaps eventually Kurt will figure that out. ;)

Thank you!

carolina_hope January 24 2011, 09:27:08 UTC

wow, change in perspective. interesting. I lvoe that the beginning, their childhood is coming back. and the way you discribed his reaction to the wink ... wow

to be honest, I still dont know what to think of the wink and probably never will be but I really like this interpretation. even if its just one sided

dawncrow January 26 2011, 06:25:43 UTC

Thank you! The wink is confusing, yeah. I address it in the next track, about to be posted, as well. I spent a long time trying to figure it out, haha, and I still don't know if I know what that was all about.

This is primarily going to be a Dave-centric story, but it'll be interspersed with some Kurt POV here and there. We'll see how it goes. :)

kironomi January 24 2011, 18:31:51 UTC

I liked this take on THE WINK.
Kurt remembering teh happy times with dave was the best part, it made my heart flutter. Yes, what could have been...
And the sex dream scene..omg!
Thanks for writing!

dawncrow January 26 2011, 06:29:05 UTC

Thanks! I was iffy about the sex dream bit in its final form so I'm glad that you liked it! :)

justams January 25 2011, 20:08:36 UTC

Finally caught up. Been getting behind on my fic reading lately. Anyway, I love this. Love the change of POV and last part. I just love the idea of them having been friends as kids.

dawncrow January 26 2011, 06:31:37 UTC

Thank you! This will be mostly Dave's POV but every once in a while I'll throw in a Kurt POV.

And yeah, writing this just makes me wish for a world where they were always friends. Because seriously, as much as I love my angst, seeing fluffy baggage-free Kurtofsky would just make me giddy inside, haha. :)

corbly January 25 2011, 23:46:26 UTC

I loved everything about this track. <3

dawncrow January 26 2011, 06:31:52 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! :)