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dawncrow

Fic: When You Hold A Flame (Vol 2: Track 1)

Jan 13, 2011 22:07

Series: When You Hold A Flame
Title: Hysteria
Pairing,Character(s): Dave Karofsky/Kurt Hummel
Rating: PG
Word Count: 420
Spoilers: Specific through 2x06. Through 2x08, AU after that (Series)
Warnings: Swearing (but just a little)
Previous Chapters: HERE
Summary: The world around him had stopped. There was nothing else that mattered.

( Fic below the cut )

glee, kurtofsky, fic, when you hold a flame

Comments 13

separatrix January 14 2011, 03:33:38 UTC

Brilliant! Oh oh, Dave can Sing for Absolution too... LOL Now I look for this ship in all Muse songs...

There's nowhere left to hide
In no one to confide
The truth burns deep inside
And will never die

dawncrow January 14 2011, 03:47:36 UTC

Dude, Muse is like, my default go-to band for ship mixes. Especially angsty ships. Because ohmygod Muse does angst well.

And...you know, I hadn't thought of using Sing for Absolution but that's a damn good one holy crap. I might have to see if I can work it in somewhere...man this mix is gonna be half Muse by the time I'm done haha.

separatrix January 14 2011, 03:58:45 UTC

I love the band--really one of my favourites. And this mix is so enjoyable, and I look forward to each time it updates. I'd track it if I had room!

dawncrow January 14 2011, 04:04:08 UTC

Aww, thank you, I feel so loved! <3 I'll be in meetings all day tomorrow so there may not be an update until late but I'll try to get it up when I can!

corbly January 14 2011, 04:11:47 UTC

I swear, you're determined to crush my heart more with every chapter. Poor Dave.

dawncrow January 22 2011, 05:27:09 UTC

Ohhhhh my god sorry for the late reply. It's, uh, it's gonna get worse before it gets better. Sorry. :( New chapter finally up!

carolina_hope January 14 2011, 06:34:45 UTC

OME, this is just ... so beautiful and so happy and then comes the shove :(

I just love his thoughts about the kiss and about how it makes him feel. and that he calls it his first

dawncrow January 22 2011, 05:28:08 UTC

Thank you! I just have to imagine that for one brief moment, giving in to those desires had to be the greatest thing...and then it all comes crashing down. And that Dave and Kurt are more similar than they even know. Thanks! New chapter finally up!

wine_carnation January 14 2011, 17:31:22 UTC

Oh... poor Dave... this is just heartbreaking, from his POV, every time...

dawncrow January 22 2011, 05:29:25 UTC

Thank you so much! I just hurt so much for what he must feel to finally give in, only to have it followed by rejection. Poor Dave... :( Sorry for the absurdly late reply, but new chapter finally up!

kironomi January 14 2011, 21:36:58 UTC

I am enjoying your mix and this fic very much. I loved Dave's inner description of the sensations. This kiss was so big, it was sucha b great deal. As I have said in the final track of the last volume, I am glad you didn't handle the kiss then but in a different volume. It is befitting since the kiss changed everything.
Thanks for writing!

dawncrow January 22 2011, 05:35:44 UTC

Thank you! You're right, the kiss changes everything for both of them, so I thought it deserved its own track. Kind of funny, I think, that a clip in the show that lasts less than a minute got four whole tracks from me, haha, but it's that important.

Sorry for the delay! New chapter finally up!

kironomi January 22 2011, 13:52:54 UTC

lol, it is indeed a very ground-breaking moment!
And i am so reading the next track when I can!