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dawncrow

Fic: When You Hold A Flame (Vol 1: Track 4)

Jan 04, 2011 23:09

Series: When You Hold A Flame
Title: I Die
Pairing,Character(s): Dave Karofsky/Kurt Hummel
Rating: R
Word Count: 439
Spoilers: Through 2x08, AU after that (Series)
Warnings: Homophobic language, swearing, brief but explicit sexual content, angst.
Previous Chapters: HERE
Summary: Why does Hummel smile like everything’s okay? Nothing is okay. Nothing ( Read more... )

glee, kurtofsky, fic, when you hold a flame

Comments 13

corbly January 5 2011, 05:40:17 UTC

omg, this chapter totally killed me. Poor Dave.

dawncrow January 6 2011, 06:02:52 UTC

I knoooowwww, poor bb. I'm sorry for all the angst...the whole first volume is lots of angst unfortunately. But then the drama starts. :) With more angst...I can't help it.

carolina_hope January 5 2011, 06:16:43 UTC

wow, this was intense

dawncrow January 6 2011, 06:03:43 UTC

Thank you! That's what I'm going for with these so thank you very much!

justams January 5 2011, 10:06:24 UTC

I'm amazed at how you manage to get so much emotion into these short things. This is so intense, and all I want to do is hug Dave and tell him it's okay.

dawncrow January 6 2011, 06:06:45 UTC

Wow, thank you so much. Seriously, I...ah, yes, it's just really good to hear that, because that's what I'm trying to do, so I'm glad that it's working! There's a lot of angst in this pairing...a lot of emotions there that the writers are ignoring in canon that fandom has room to explore. Thank you!

kironomi January 8 2011, 22:59:44 UTC

wow, you are really good at angst.
I loved the jerking off part. When you think of someone in a moment when you can't control your thoughts, then you really have fallen bad.

dawncrow January 12 2011, 05:29:13 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm not sure what it says about me that I love my angst so much, heh.

And yeah, I have to think that this would seem like crossing a line for Karofsky, when he thinks of Kurt while jerking off. Poor boy.

mizvickers January 12 2011, 12:00:36 UTC

(Ok, so I've been reading these on the bus on my phone and really needed to get around to actually commenting on them)

Wonderful song choice!

"a first name he hasn’t used in years slipping through his lips like a prayer" --guh!

I very much love (and angst for) that mental line Dave hashad. I am also very glad it's now it past tense.
Oh, Glee (and also this lovely fic), you make me want to hug fictional characters...and not even in a sexy way but in a 'my heart breaks for you' way.

dawncrow January 12 2011, 20:42:18 UTC

Lol, thanks for your comments! I know I'm terrible about commenting on fics so don't worry about it at all if you don't.

Thanks so much for your kind words! :)

jayyy9o March 21 2011, 18:06:41 UTC

Exactly what I was going to say. I loved that line.
"a first name he hasn’t used in years slipping through his lips like a prayer"
Really enjoying this so far.