new poem...YAY!!!

[dawna_who_ever]

i looked at you, you look away
i turn to you , you turn away
you tell me that everythings alright
but when i smile you just walk by
i wish i wasnt in visible...
i love the way that you stare
then i realize you dont even know im there
i love the way you call out my name
but then i awake
i wish i wasnt invisible...

Comments

[jlukas]

I like it.

[mirbiggs]

you would Jacob. :p so dawna, why the depression? you have so many friends that don't act that way at all towards you. don't be sad dawna, we love you!

[johnny_fuck]

good poem, good song you're listening to there.

[seckela]

I looked at you, you looked away
I called for you, you didnt stay
you tell me everythings alright
yet loving me is not in your sight
I wish I wasnt invisible...
I love the way that you stare
I hate the way you just dont care
I love the way you call my name
But Im the boy you feel ashame
I wish I wasnt invisible...