I love it, but I think in part 3 the girl does a bit too much "sensing". Even a deaf-mute with no sign language can read emotions and such in people's faces and behavior; I'd suggest varying or specifying how she learns of things here.
Why do I suddenly feel like saying, "You have chosen wisely...."
It was funny when you offered to play one of the parts because I had in mind Himring Whore (I just tried to spell "whore" as "hore," so I think it's time for breakfast!), but Girl wasn't such a good character either. Although I'd definitely pick her too! :)
No, I didn't mean I had in mind Himring Hore for you to play! I meant that I had the character in my mind when you said, "How about I play both parts?"
Thanks for sharing this delectable piece of Tyelkormo smut. How ironic that the most outspoken Feanorion will get strongly attracted (?) to a deaf/mute girl! You're a genius. The story left me curious as to why Maitimo retained her as his personal servant, could he be attracted to her as well besides her not hearing his counsels? And what exactly is he saying when his mouth moves in her shape while he's bathing? Poor Tyelkormo having to go to the Himring w.h.*.r.e. :^( BTW, I also enjoyed the Curufin and Tyelkormo "moment" about Luthien.
Thank you! This is so old ... I think you remember it better than I do. :^P I did rather like it at the time, I recall, considering that the bunny was pretty much a PWP from a friend of mine who often kept me company in the gutter beside the crumpled Bud Light can and the Snickers wrapper. It's always fun to get a comment on an old story; thank you for reading (and commenting!), and I'm pleased that you enjoyed this old dinosaur. ;)
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I had ASL for language credit in uni, so maybe I'll dig out my old textbooks and such....
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Although the whole deaf thing would kind of suck. So I'll go with being Girl and not Himring Whore.
But still, hott!! :)
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It was funny when you offered to play one of the parts because I had in mind Himring Whore (I just tried to spell "whore" as "hore," so I think it's time for breakfast!), but Girl wasn't such a good character either. Although I'd definitely pick her too! :)
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I just tried to spell "whore" as "hore," so I think it's time for breakfast!
Haha! Way to go, Dawn...;P
...wait, are you saying you think I'm a skank face?? Just kidding! ;P
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*blushes hard*
Sowwy....
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BTW, I also enjoyed the Curufin and Tyelkormo "moment" about Luthien.
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