Comments | davynn: First Night Out- Girl With One Eye 'Verse- Giftfic

davynn

First Night Out- Girl With One Eye 'Verse- Giftfic

Nov 05, 2011 00:40

( Cas blushed profusely as he swept his gaze across the high-end clothing store, most of the other patrons averting their eyes when they were caught staring. )

character: dean winchester, genre: giftfic, fandom: supernatural, pairing: dean/castiel, verse: girl with one eye, genre: au, genre: slash, character: castiel

Comments 15

alyssia333 November 5 2011, 10:07:16 UTC

~dies~ omg sooooo love this. Even as a Demon Dean is sweet!!!!! ans Cas is hot ina skirt and YES a skinny tie!!

davynn November 6 2011, 21:31:13 UTC

Haha, thanks so much! Your comments always make me super smiley. :) I like to think that Dean's strong loyalty would carry through even if he was a demon, and Cas totally enthralls him. He's never really experienced being so fascinated with someone, so he's eager to see all there is to him. :P

joidianne4eva November 5 2011, 13:33:03 UTC

Yessss, the skirt and the mirror...I can't even.....

(commentor will return after brain has demushified)

davynn November 6 2011, 21:32:38 UTC

Haha, oh my. >w< Thanks so much, that's actually quite flattering. The addition of the mirror was actually a last second decision that I did on a whim, so I'm glad it turned out well. ^^

ubikono November 5 2011, 16:00:47 UTC

Thank you for writing this prompt. I'm this fluffy ball of happiness because you wrote something that could have been pure smut but you gave it a realistic plot.

I felt for Cas, he's insecure and with Dean's help (rough ways) he's doing all these things he's never done before. Cas is gaining some confidence in himself and he's developing interest in womens clothing. Though the scene in the restaurant was heart-breaking. At least, Dean's methods to heal Cas's hurt worked.

davynn November 6 2011, 21:36:35 UTC

Aw, you're absolutely welcome! I actually love doing things for my readers and it makes me happy when people put out requests. Thanks for being a repeat reader! I actually have a REALLY hard time not putting in tons of plot. I just HAVE to. :P So I'm glad that turned out well. ^^

Exactly! When Dean met him, he was just sort of this blank canvas- having been sheltered and not really having ever experienced the world much. Now, with Dean's help, he's discovering all that is out there for him to be. ^^

hollybennett123 November 5 2011, 22:09:46 UTC

Amazing :D I was super excited to see this sequel as I loved the first two fics in the series, and this didn't disappoint at all! Bravo!

davynn November 6 2011, 21:38:28 UTC

Ah! I'm super excited that you decided to comment! I love being able to see my readers, get to know them, and maybe do something in return to thank them. ^^

I'm glad that people are really taking to this 'verse and am anxious to keep adding to it. Thanks for reading.

lleftoverture November 6 2011, 08:37:29 UTC

Simply delicious.

davynn November 6 2011, 21:39:27 UTC

Haha, thank you! It's fun/awkward to try and come up with some ideas for what they can do next. :P