Heroes Fic: Transparency

[daughtershade]

Title: Transparency
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: N/A
Rating: G
Notes: This fic was written for amiguriken because she is a Claude fan and I'm an Adam fan. Two great tastes that taste great together. Oh and Little!Elle is in here just for fun. This is set sometime during the flashbacks from "Company Man". Elle here is six, which makes Claire about two, and

Comments

[amiguriken]

Yay! You posted it! I'm going to reread it now.

[daughtershade]

I may email you what I have of the Alias/Heroes xover tonight. I want to see the reaction of a non-Alias person to see if it makes sense.

[amiguriken]

Sounds good. You know me and reading fanfic!

[trueroyalty]

This was very enjoyable fic to read. I could picture every scene in my mind; especially loved the Elle/Claude scenes. I can just see this little blonde flying past the window. And Claude being so... fatherly- it was really sweet, but true to character. And slapping Adam on the head was great, which sounds odd, but there you go. ;)

Thanks for sharing this!

~TR

[daughtershade]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I was writing it more for Adam than for Claude, but then I found myself just enjoying writing him. He creeps up on you, as an invisible man should I guess. :D

[horsescanswim]

This was brilliant, particularly your characterization. I loved the Elle and Claude moments. Adorable!

"I doubt any voice from my head would sound so...North."

Possibly one of the best lines in fanfic, ever. :D

[daughtershade]

Thank you. I didn't originally intend for Elle to be there, but it just made sense, and then I ended up writing more of her because they were so cute.

Possibly one of the best lines in fanfic, ever. :D

Hee. A little Doctor Who joke for my peeps. I couldn't help myself.

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it!

[elliesmeow]

That was frakking amazing. Just wow. Thanks. I think you id a tremendous job with each and every one of the characters you wrote here.

Loved the way you ended it.

-Ellie

[daughtershade]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I like Noah getting the upper hand as well. It's just so HRG. :D

[elliesmeow]

Yeah it is. That's one of the reasons I love him. He's like "pshhh super powers? I am made of awesome, super powers can kiss my ass".LOL

-Ellie

[one_hoopy_frood]

I found this fic while searching back in heroes_fic for something with Adam and I'm really glad I came across it! Awesome fic is awesome. Your characterization was perfect, especially with Claude. I'd never really thought of him as a kid person before, but I can definitely see it now. I loved Adam's amazement at the amount of channels on TV. Also, the joke about Claude's accent was for the win.

[daughtershade]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write. I'm glad that there were four months between Adam & Peter's escape and when they met back up. If he really had been trapped there 15 years, he would be out of touch. I bet he spent those four months readjusting. I want to read a fic like that, but most of the Adam fic seems to be Adam/Peter. I like just a good character fic now and again. Thanks for the feedback!

[one_hoopy_frood]

That is a really great idea for a fic. I happen to be more of a gen person myself as far as writing goes, and I've been looking for a way to start writing fic for Heroes... would you mind if I gave it a shot?

[daughtershade]

Oh BY ALL MEANS! Just let me know when you're finished because I'd love to read it. Heck, I wouldn't even mind betaing it if you need someone to!

I can tell you're the type of person that really knows where your towel is, after all. ;D