saturday exercise

[datenshiblue]

Olympiad, RPS
Not Swimming!! :O

PG-13, Yang Wei, Jonathan Horton (artistic gymnastics)

Disclaimer: Not real! Not even pretending to be real!!

Comments

[jupiterjones]

Oh this is quite brilliant! Loved the exchange. Both guys hot as hell! This was totally a meeting of the erotic Chinese and American...

Absolutely well written.. I would say I was jealous, but I'm too much in lust..

Damn woman!

Hugs... Wow!

Veep

[datenshiblue]

*adores!*

and yay, you liked! :D

<3333333!

[riiche]

Oh, I loved this; how cheeky Yang Wei was and how Jon responded to him so playfully. Thanks for sharing!

[datenshiblue]

You are welcome, and thank you! :-D

[de_yi]

lol. i like this too! :D

your opening and ending are really good. love your writing and story line. (:

[datenshiblue]

Yay! I'm glad the 'this didn't happen' device worked! ;-)

Many thanks! <333

[darklucia]

Aww this was cute :) Really enjoyed it. The intro is a bit cheesy but it fit with Jon pretty well. I don't know much about Yang Wei's personality but from the glimpse of him at this Olympics I can easily imagine him like this, and Jon too.

Only thing I would have changed was every "Jonny" to "Jon". He just doesn't feel like a "Jonny". Maybe the team calls him that, but it just feels weird *shrug*

[datenshiblue]

:) thanks for reading!