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Mar 18, 2010 21:25

☀ what if?
1056 words.
pg ; one-sided jonghyun/key
summary ; what if key liked jonghyun?
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In love stories, the best relationships always come from people who start out good friends. )

pairing: jonghyun/key, * fanfiction, group: shinee

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naturedichotomy March 19 2010, 05:30:19 UTC
I know that I should be sad about this, but I'm too busy being giddy about the ninja!SeungKey.
regardless, I like it a lot. Jjong is such a romantic ♥

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datakicker March 22 2010, 00:21:22 UTC
thanks, haha i'm glad that you liked it. :)

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xxqod March 19 2010, 07:16:49 UTC
Jonghyun's life is easy to make hard XD
Poor boy XD
(Laughs)

And here I never expected Kibum to say he isn't gay .. XD
*goes hiding in a corner*

<3 ~~

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datakicker March 22 2010, 00:31:32 UTC
haha yeah, i know. ;~; i figured that wouldn't be very believable for key to say that but i didn't want to switch the characters around so it was key chasing after jonghyun.

but yeah, thanks for commenting! :D

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datakicker March 22 2010, 00:32:17 UTC
:D thanks, i'm glad you loved it!
haha and i'm not sure if i'll continue this. :P i'll think about it.

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harkk March 19 2010, 08:41:23 UTC
i like this. one-sided!jongkey has sort of always been my favourite though they're my otp. mehh.

i like the way this oneshot progressed. there's not too much drama and well, you can kinda feel for jonghyun.

the first paragraph/section/whatever is all kinds of win, really. XD though somehow in my opinion (please don't bash me D:), i felt that the last two lines of the last paragraph/section/whatever was a little redundant. but hey, to each his own. (:

still, i like. :D

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datakicker March 22 2010, 00:37:18 UTC
thanks. :)

haha, and i wouldn't bash you, don't worry. :) and yeah, i totally see where you're coming from. :/ i was going to take those out and end it differently but then i was like, "ah, whatever, i already wrote it down."

but i'm glad you liked it, regardless of the redundancy. :)

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salted_taiyaki March 19 2010, 19:32:53 UTC
“I recommend listening to your iPod on full volume for the next hour, prude.”

"My psychic powers aren’t as good as they used to be.”
favorite lines ♥

gosh jjong's been through so much pain for the past few days! ha ha all i've been reading are one-sided jongkey stories and most of them were about jjong being hurt, ha ha. i liked it anyway, it was really nice! so sweet, the way it jumped from "what if"s to "this is the way it is." idk it was really sad, what with kibum just so blatantly claiming that he wasn't gay but... it was bittersweet/cute nevertheless ♥

thank you for sharing! ha ha

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datakicker March 22 2010, 00:40:35 UTC
your welcome. :) haha, thanks for commenting and i'm glad you liked it!

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datakicker March 22 2010, 00:41:40 UTC
lol, i mean you're**
;~;

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salted_taiyaki March 22 2010, 01:17:08 UTC
oh pish posh, little typos like that are okayy

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