haha yeah, i know. ;~; i figured that wouldn't be very believable for key to say that but i didn't want to switch the characters around so it was key chasing after jonghyun.
i like this. one-sided!jongkey has sort of always been my favourite though they're my otp. mehh.
i like the way this oneshot progressed. there's not too much drama and well, you can kinda feel for jonghyun.
the first paragraph/section/whatever is all kinds of win, really. XD though somehow in my opinion (please don't bash me D:), i felt that the last two lines of the last paragraph/section/whatever was a little redundant. but hey, to each his own. (:
haha, and i wouldn't bash you, don't worry. :) and yeah, i totally see where you're coming from. :/ i was going to take those out and end it differently but then i was like, "ah, whatever, i already wrote it down."
but i'm glad you liked it, regardless of the redundancy. :)
“I recommend listening to your iPod on full volume for the next hour, prude.”
"My psychic powers aren’t as good as they used to be.” favorite lines ♥
gosh jjong's been through so much pain for the past few days! ha ha all i've been reading are one-sided jongkey stories and most of them were about jjong being hurt, ha ha. i liked it anyway, it was really nice! so sweet, the way it jumped from "what if"s to "this is the way it is." idk it was really sad, what with kibum just so blatantly claiming that he wasn't gay but... it was bittersweet/cute nevertheless ♥
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regardless, I like it a lot. Jjong is such a romantic ♥
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Poor boy XD
(Laughs)
And here I never expected Kibum to say he isn't gay .. XD
*goes hiding in a corner*
<3 ~~
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but yeah, thanks for commenting! :D
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haha and i'm not sure if i'll continue this. :P i'll think about it.
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i like the way this oneshot progressed. there's not too much drama and well, you can kinda feel for jonghyun.
the first paragraph/section/whatever is all kinds of win, really. XD though somehow in my opinion (please don't bash me D:), i felt that the last two lines of the last paragraph/section/whatever was a little redundant. but hey, to each his own. (:
still, i like. :D
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haha, and i wouldn't bash you, don't worry. :) and yeah, i totally see where you're coming from. :/ i was going to take those out and end it differently but then i was like, "ah, whatever, i already wrote it down."
but i'm glad you liked it, regardless of the redundancy. :)
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"My psychic powers aren’t as good as they used to be.”
favorite lines ♥
gosh jjong's been through so much pain for the past few days! ha ha all i've been reading are one-sided jongkey stories and most of them were about jjong being hurt, ha ha. i liked it anyway, it was really nice! so sweet, the way it jumped from "what if"s to "this is the way it is." idk it was really sad, what with kibum just so blatantly claiming that he wasn't gay but... it was bittersweet/cute nevertheless ♥
thank you for sharing! ha ha
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;~;
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