Comments | dashidorawa: complicated; sunggyu/sungyeol; pg

yolochinchins in dashidorawa

complicated; sunggyu/sungyeol; pg

Dec 05, 2013 03:26

Title: complicated
Author yolochinchins
Rating: PG
Pairing/Focus: sunggyu/sungyeol
Word Count: 2731
Summary: sunggyu thinks he's got everyone figured out but then there's sungyeol...

( sungyeol’s long long long legs that are hidden by boots, aside from his thighs peeking out of that really short red sequined skirt and sunggyu immediately tosses his phone aside and tries to empty his brain of all thoughts about sungyeol and his legs. )

!fanfic, pairing: sunggyu/sungyeol, author: y, rating: pg

Comments 10

chanyeolized December 5 2013, 14:39:26 UTC

I am going to men this foreverrrrrrrrr
omg I love this so much
this is perfection
I love the characterization
they are all so perfect
and omg evolution and baby myungsoo being scared and
orz
thankyou so much for this!!!!
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yolochinchins December 6 2013, 01:46:24 UTC

your comment makes me smile gaah, im glad you liked it so much ouo

amaelamin_ December 5 2013, 16:10:02 UTC

i love this. your style is so fresh here, how the sentences throw up images of thoughts and feelings so well. i love that while gyuyeol is quite a rare ship all of this makes so much sense.

yolochinchins December 6 2013, 01:46:58 UTC

thank you so much!
yes, i think there needs to be more gyuyeol in the world u__u
/whispers; you should write some gyuyeol

nemaeun December 5 2013, 18:13:26 UTC

ahh. gyuyeol. my most secretly loved and little written ship. i really like your writing style, and how you didn't plump for the generic happy end or the serious talk scene that usually comes into something like this. your characterisations are really great, sungyeol really is an enigma and you played that out so well, and woohyun with the cup was hilarious, i can just see him doing something like that. thank you also for writing gyuyeol and sufficiently distracting me from my university assignments.

yolochinchins December 6 2013, 01:47:50 UTC

gyuyeol is everyone's secret otp.

thank you so much for this comment though, it makes me really glad that i posted it ;u;

weerainbow December 8 2013, 02:16:59 UTC

Ooooo this is good! I love how it has this kind of intensity about it...like I can feel how desperate Gyu is to figure out Sungyeol and that feeling grows exponentially throughout the piece. Really nicely done. And the way you described each of them just works so well, the interactions feel so real and the tension so tangible. I was getting worked up along with Gyu by the end and when they finally kissed properly and all the questions and doubts started to fade from his mind it was like I could feel it draining away. Definitely not a common pairing but you worked it fabulously

yolochinchins December 8 2013, 08:08:41 UTC

i feel so terrible because i absolutely love your comment and it feels like im letting you down with this lame ass reply lol.
but akljdjsljkfd thank you so much for this comment, honestly, i can get quite anxious about others reading what i write, but knowing you actually enjoyed this and thought it was written well enough makes me feel like 938434583789 better so thank you so much ;u;

weerainbow December 8 2013, 22:30:59 UTC

Oh sweetie, I'm honoured that you felt impacted by my comment but really you wrote this beautifully so you deserved that and more ♥

penny_lane_42 December 21 2013, 18:32:22 UTC

Sungyeol would completely baffle Sunggyu. They're such complete opposites in every way, and I can easily see Sunggyu's frustrated lack of understanding of Yeol translating to frustrated fascination. I'm glad you shared this--there isn't enough fic of these two in the world.