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fic: The King is Dead, All Hail the King - Heavy is the Crown

Apr 25, 2012 14:50

Title: The King is Dead, All Hail the King - Heavy is the Crown
Author: darhtbatgirl
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Rating: G
Characters: Tim, Dick
Summary: Timothy goes to visit Bruce's grave
Warnings: angst

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dick, tim, series: hail to the king

Comments 6

eternal_moonie April 25 2012, 18:51:16 UTC

AMAZINGLY AWESOME start honey!

I totally caught Tim's pain.

*hugs him*

darthbatgirl April 25 2012, 23:09:44 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed this part. :) Poor Tim was so upset. *pets the poor little king*

dungeonwriter April 25 2012, 19:10:13 UTC

Awww, I love this world!!!! So beautiful.

darthbatgirl April 25 2012, 23:11:50 UTC

Thank you so much, this should be very fun to play in! :D

larsinger29 April 26 2012, 02:06:28 UTC

Intriguing start. I like how you set it at Bruce's tomb, it really cemented the tone you wanted to come across. Tim's rant was really beautiful, I could feel his pain and fear. Even better was Dick (even though he'll be called Richard in this, I'm still gonna call him Dick. Can't help it, lol) coming to his aid and giving Tim his support and comfort. Those words and that simple act really set the tone for their relationship.

Terrific opening. This 'verse is going to be a lot of fun, and I'm eager to see what all you do with it!!

darthbatgirl April 27 2012, 00:18:18 UTC

*grins* Oh I had such a time writing their names, I had to keep going back and changing them from Dick and Tim to Richard and Timothy. Old habits die hard and all that.

And Dick will always come when Tim needs him. It's just the nature of their relationship I think.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this first part hon.