I simply suck beyond measure...

[darth_luna]

While I'm staying with my parents, my internet access has been seriously, seriously limited. I haven't gotten around to commenting on all the ficexchange stories I loved, especially argosy's and bambu345's and several others whose authors' names I can't remember. I'm so behind on my snape_detentions that I will never catch up! And I flaked out on due to illness on my own

Comments

[argosy]

This is really fantastic, and I can't wait until you start posting wider. What I love most about it (and all your writing, really) is how real and detailed your use of magic is. I love when authors really think about the spells and what goes in them. (Something I should maybe try.) We got to get you to write an arithmancy story someday. But not until you finish this. Or one of your other WIPs!

I love the way you handle the D/Hr relationship. And your POV shifts are effortless. yay, me! I get to be associated with this. *cracks whip*

It's funny that your internet time is curbed by your stay with your parents. I've been here in my parents home for a while, and my internet time has shot through the roof. They have highspeed wireless. And I have developed a Stargate: Atlantis slash fixation. I really do look forward to hearing your thoughts on Breathe. Which sounds like all kinds of pressure, I know, but mainly it's just that I value your input. :) Feel well.

[darth_luna]

I love when authors really think about the spells and what goes in them. (Something I should maybe try.

Oh, I dunno, I thought you did a fairly stunning job of that in Sharper Than Any Thorn actually. Like JKR, you zoom in or out on the magical details according to the needs of the story, which is just right, I think.

But thank you. And, to indulge in a big baby-like burst of insecurity-- do you really think it works? I worried it felt too...dialoguey. And the exseminis charm was...well, I was in love with the idea, but I'm not too sure about the execution...

Anyway, I'm asking because I'm considering cleaning the three parts I have and posting them to coloured grey (it being probably the least critical of archives that would take this, since clearly there are people who will read anything DHr). But you know, baby writer, very nervous...

[argosy]

fairly stunning job of that in Sharper Than Any Thorn

As Sharp As Any Thorn!! Grr. People always call my story that. And the few people who've read "Of Dark and Bright" can't seem to get the title right. "Of Bright and Dark" "Of Dark and Light" You get the idea. Hmm... Maybe it's me. I hate titles, Okay, I'm done.

This is an excellent story and you should have no qualms at all about posting, but then you must finish it. Please, with all the crap in the world, and you're worrried whether it is good enough? It is to laugh. That is all.

[darth_luna]

As Sharp As Any Thorn!!
mea culpa! (beating oneself in abject apology...well, not really, but nonetheless...)

Sorry! I don't know why my brain keeps sticking the wrong comparative form in there. Readers are dumb. You must remember that.

I take a solemn vow to finish it. Really. I have to. Cause I've already started imagining the sequel, which involves them going to Vegas.

[harmony_bites]

Aw, no need to feel nervous. I like how this is coming along. I like the wit--"alien skill set," "Mudbloodfuck"--lots of little phrases here made me smile. Sorry you've been sick and missed the DM/HG deadline, though I admire you trying--I was too chicken to try the SS/HG exchange. Hope you're feelign better.

[darth_luna]

Hey thanks-- actually, I have a favor to ask-- remember how I um, asked you to beta that exchange story I flaked out of? Weeelll-- would you be willing to look over the three parts of this I have so far with a more critical eye before I post them to Coloured Grey? (feel free to say no).

[harmony_bites]

That would be a 'yes' - though I can't promise a quick turnaround--I'm sure I can get the first chapter back to you within a few days, all three perhaps within a week. My email is harmony_bites@yahoo.com.

I like the story very much*g* or I wouldn't say yes. Though I find it ironic that me the so-called SS/HG shipper has so far found herself a DM/HG beta two authors out of three...

[darth_luna]

Though I find it ironic that me the so-called SS/HG shipper has so far found herself a DM/HG beta two authors out of three...

LOL. It's that Snapeish sense of duty!

Yay! Will email part 1...it's coded for html-- is that ok, or do you need it code-stripped?

[jenna_alatariel]

Hi! Glad to see you back! I look forward to reading this story at home later today! *squee*
How are you doing? HOw is everything going?

[darth_luna]

LOL. Thanks for the Snape applause. It's cracking me up.

That was so fun!

[patriciaormsby]

Dear Shelley,

I'm so glad you continue to write! As usual, I had a look at the length, and thought, okay, I'll budget some time tomorrow, and then went ahead and read it all right then.

I know what you mean about these things leading off in different directions from where you started. I'm at a stand still on my Snape fic. I've enjoyed writing it, and may eventually post some more, but I think I'm just not connecting with anyone. I've not studied the Potter World in depth enough to do this well.

I love the details you describe and your way with words. I love how your characters interact. I look forward to reading more.

Wishing you good health!
Pat

Re: That was so fun!

[darth_luna]

Aw thanks, I'm so thrilled you liked it.

I'm about to delve into your most recent Weaver bits-- I'm sorry you're feeling frustrated with it. I think it's very inventive--Weaver has a neat, trickster quality to her.

[darth_luna]

Hey you! (I love your fanart-- especially the one with Draco and Hermione in the matching eyepatches). Thanks so much for the feedback! It's funny, because I don't really feel like I handle the magic very creatively, so having you say that is a huge boost. (though mock-textbooks...hm. probably not writing one of those anytime soon...)