Seeing Red

[darth_kittius]

Title: Seeing Red
Characters/pairing: Bill/Hermione
Rating: PG
Summary: Bill becomes distracted by a pair of shoes.
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They are the property of J. K. Rowling. If they were mine, Hermione would not be with Ron for more than a month.

Author's Notes: First, a SUPER big thank you to gfeather for the

Comments

[gfeather]

Yeay! I was happy to look at this:)

You've reminded me that it has been far to long since I went shoe shopping.

[darth_kittius]

Fun new shoes are essential! I need some too, now that you mention it....

And thanks again - it's always amazing how much improvement a few small changes can make.

[scifichick774]

This was delightful! Thank you!

[darth_kittius]

*blushes* Thank YOU! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[lady_rhian]

1. That is shoe pr0n. And I wants a pair now.

2. his roommate, his best friend, and his ex-sister-in-law, Hermione - ooh, this will be fun.

3. I like Bill's observation about what the position of the shoes means. Delightful to read.

4. Luna and Draco. ~happy sigh~ Even with so little set-up, Bill's possessiveness and her confusion are palpable in the dialogue, a delicious undertone reminding us that there has been a Disruption to their comfortable routine.

5. “Next time you’ll wear those for me, and only me.” Cue a belly swoop! ~fans self~ ~gestures to icon~

[darth_kittius]

I had fun identifying which pair I wanted to include as the picture in this. I believe I settled on some delicious Jimmy Choo's, which I would love to own....

Thanks for noticing the positions of the shoes. I wanted to include something to show how close they were. They could really read each other but it hadn't even occurred to him that he was in love with the witch. Silly Bill. :)

[qiushuwen]

Love your Bill and Hermione! Darn that epilogue though...

[darth_kittius]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

[apisa_b]

Well, at least I can dream about shoes...

I always was a Bill / Hermione fangirl at heart. Thanks for reminding me of that. One tends to find that pairing not often enough in fics.

Loved how the shoes shook him awake.

[darth_kittius]

I have to say I was drooling when I went looking to find the picture of the shoes!

Thanks! I have to say I'm Charlie/Hermione mostly, but I do love myself a good Bill/Hermione too. There's not enough of either, frankly. We need to convince more people to see the potential like we do! :)