Short: Interview With the Grandmother

[darth_gojira]

Hermione Granger wished people were as easy to interpret as books. As she felt Augusta Longbottom’s hard gaze burn into her, she wished she had some sort of way to tell what the old witch was thinking. Her eyes reminded her of McGongall’s critical gaze that Neville had told Hermione she had shared, mixed with a bit of Moody’s sternness. Still, she

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[coffee_n_cocoa]

I could see Gran going with that particular line of questioning for her only grandson.

On a more technical note, do you have a beta? I've noticed you have a habit of dropping punctuation, especially periods, and your stories would be stronger if those were included.

[darth_gojira]

I haven't had a beta in many years. They just didn't get back to me very promptly. I lost track of the one I had (but again, she only beta'd one story)
For the past year, it's just me on my lonesome

[coffee_n_cocoa]

Well, if you ever need one for spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc...

[darth_gojira]

As a matter of fact, I do. :)

[hm276]

Sweet and fitting, thank you.