Scanners2/First Monday fic

[darth_begbie]

This is just a repost of my Hewligan fest fic. I'm feeling down after blowing off Nanowrimo this year. (its not like I've ever finished it, lol) I'm hoping that by reviewing something I've actually finished it'll jumpstart me into writing some more. I liked these characters and would like to do more in this universe

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OK lets see how I handle this one lol

[anonymous]

I'm not gonna kid you. The story is awesome and definitely has left some questions that I want answered. Now for the hard for me to deal with part. I was actually, as hard as it is to say this and I can't believe i am actually going to say this, but ummm......well turned on by the scene. So if that is any indication of how well your visual metaphors have worked...then there ya go. *blush* Now I am off to do something manly like chop wood or watch football or something lol.

~J