MfWAT: No Turning Back

[darth_animus]

Memories from Western Air Temple
Chapter Title: No Turning Back
Characters: Zuko, Aang (main) Katara (minor)
Arc: Unity Arc
Setting: after Not a Woman, before The Call of Reality
Rating: K
Warnings: shounen-ai, spoilers
Summary: A short tale in which Zuko learns to understand Aang better and Aang sees something he’s been refusing to see.

Comments

[findmyantidrug]

I like the way you mirrored the two boys between the two sections here. Katara, don't interrupt them at a moment like that! -shakes fist-

[darth_animus]

Thanks. I don't usually change POVs in the middle of these chapters, so I was wondering how people would receive that. I'm glad you think it worked out well.

[anonymous]

seriously, no lie! i ADORE your work i love this story and i absolutedly look forward to it every single time. i really think you capture their character well and i love how you portray them. Honestly i check if you update everyday, youve got me so hooked =].

i just realized i can leave you a comment even though im not a member, so ya =]

[darth_animus]

Wow, sounds like the way I am about a couple of other stories. I'm happy to hear that you like the story so much and I'll do my best to keep the updates frequent.

[alpha2nd2006]

LOL! That is so awesome. Aang came up with a technique while thinking of Zuko? I love the imagery of the hugs and stuff. Especially that beginning scene where Aang is all like "where's my good-job hug?" and Zuko is like "lalalala I'm clueless"

But geez, Zuko is so skittish (but that's totally in character) poor Aang! You can do it!

[darth_animus]

Thanks. I'm happy to hear that you liked the chapter. The idea about he firebending flower just decided to burn my pantleg and wouldn't leave it alone until I wrote it.

Oh, Zuko and Aang take turns in frustrating each other in this fic. I mean, considering how much Zuzu has been making doe-eyes at Aangie, one would think he of all people would notice how out little Avatar wants his affection. XP

cant wait for the next one =]

[anonymous]

aw....im missin your stories

Re: cant wait for the next one =]

[anonymous]

Me too

[silentdictator]

Suddenly there were arms around the airbender’s shoulders and a voice whispering in his ear: “You really were great during practice today.”

This hurt my soul. Domestic Zukaang FTW! xDDD This was brilliant!

[darth_animus]

Thank you. I remember being quite pleased with this when I first wrote it, as it's one of the few occasions I've gotten Zuko to initiate contact between these two.