Comments | darsynia: Truth and Consequences (Remus, G)

darsynia

Truth and Consequences (Remus, G)

Apr 03, 2007 16:49

Title: Truth and Consequences
Author: darsynia Copy and paste ftw. DUH, I wrote it, it's on my journal!
Rating: G
Prompt Set: 100quills 100.3, Remus
Prompt: 074, World
Word Count: 500
Summary: Remus sees something in the Marauder's Map that changes his life forever
Warnings/Notes: This was also prompted by lilbreck's challenge prompt:
'Pay attention to this moment, it ( Read more... )

fanfiction: hp: drabble/ficlet, fandom:harry potter, fanfiction: hp: remus lupin, fic challenges: hp: 100quills, fanfiction: hp: genfic, fanfiction: hp: rated g

Comments 13

gwenlliana April 3 2007, 21:22:41 UTC

Very very nice! It's good to hear from you again!

darsynia April 3 2007, 21:46:11 UTC

Thank you! I've missed you all :) *big hugs*

gwenlliana April 3 2007, 22:51:35 UTC

We missed you too Hon. *Big Hugs right back at you*

lilbreck April 3 2007, 21:25:28 UTC

And this is me squeeing. I love your Remus, and I love how you packed so much emotion and turmoil into his reaction.

Yes, I also love the little bit of Snape at the end. Perfect!

darsynia April 3 2007, 21:48:27 UTC

ooOOoo love the icon! I need me some more Remus, all I have is a naughty one and him casting >.>

Thank you! I can't possibly imgine what it's like for someone realizing that they might have been deadly wrong about something, and how realizing that could turn 12 years upside down in a matter of minutes. I tried to convey what little I could grasp but I couldn't resist the whole twist of what changed the world for a time was him missing his potion, not necessarily what he found out ;)

lilbreck April 3 2007, 21:52:33 UTC

Now I wish I had my HP DVDs here so I could cap and icon him. ::huggles up on Remus::

rj_lupins_kat April 3 2007, 22:24:03 UTC

Hey! Left a review on FFN, as I didn't see your LJ entry until just now.

Wonderful piece! And it is so good to see you back to writing. Hope all is going well for you.

Cheers!

darsynia April 4 2007, 00:06:12 UTC

Thank you for both reviews! And thanks for the encouragement while I was away--all is doing decently, and looking up, most assuredly :D

hugs!

rj_lupins_kat April 4 2007, 00:41:40 UTC

You're most welcome - you earned the reviews.

*big hug*

kimmers84 April 7 2007, 05:25:53 UTC

Loved it! I stopped by to see if you had added anything to TSIK, but not yet!
This was a nice surprise though. You don't know me from Adam, but I found you TSIK fic back in September, and became hooked!
Hope you are doing well!
Kim

darsynia April 15 2007, 00:41:27 UTC

I'm glad you like it! I'm trying to get back to writing TSIK, but I want to make sure I'm not rusty because I love that fic like my own child and I'm the type to be protective :)

Hopefully sometime in the next week or two there'll be an update. One thing that's daunting is... I have to read the whole thing over so I'm sure I don't mess with continuity, because my huge honkin' outline that I was working on with all the relevant bits isn't finished yet.

ladybluestar April 15 2007, 00:33:44 UTC

That's just fantastic with how you described Remus' reaction to the Map's revelation. Also, I liked how you described Sirius, Peter, and Snape by their relationships to Remus. And nice bit at the end there with the explanation as to why Remus didn't take the potion.

darsynia April 15 2007, 00:39:46 UTC

Thank you! I always thought there was a bit more to the fact that the werewolf missed his potion that night; I wouldn't put it past Snape to decide to let Remus sweat it out a little wondering if he'll have to transform as a punishment for what he and his friends did in school.

Love the icon, by the way :)