A Cry Before Battle - a gift for The Community!

[scarletladyy]

Title: A Cry Before Battle
Author: _afterism
Recipient: The Community
Pairing(s): Lily Evans/Bellatrix Lestrange
Word Count: 1803
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Dub-con (borderline non-con), violence, infidelity
Summary: She keeps one hand on her wand, and thinks she's safe.
Author's Notes: I loved all your prompts and I tried to get as many kinks in as I could -

Comments

[shameful_desire]

I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!

[deslea]

Wow, this is intense, and really well put together. I was all, "wha?" about the pairing, and as soon as you put the scenario out there, you had me hook, line and sinker. How very like Bella to dangle the offer, and punish Lily with her idea of play. Very reminiscent of her toying with Hermione in the torture scene in the Manor. And Lily was just as in-character, afraid and yet without question saying "no." I also loved the idea that one of her three times defying the Dark Lord could have been something other than a battle - it's hard to believe a young woman would have survived three bouts of combat with him head-to-head. (She must have defied three times before her death - ie, her death was the fourth - for Voldemort to target her). It was well-written as well. Nice work!

[leontinabowie]

Dub-con Bellatrix/Lily is a favourite thing of mine, and you captured all that I love about it. A cruel, only somewhat sane Bellatrix, a tough Lily, and an intense scene between the two of them. Great work :)

[fluffyllama]

Oh, very intense. Great stuff!