Revenge and Ruffles - a gift for _afterism!

[scarletladyy]

Title: Revenge and Ruffles
Author/Artist: marianna_merlo
Recipient: _afterism
Pairing(s): Narcissa Malfoy/Hermione Granger
Word Count: 2,200
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Non-con, mind control
Summary: They would never find her, and even if they did, it would be thrilling to see their shock at what she had become.
Author's Notes: Dear _afterism, you gave me a great prompt that

Comments

[reg_flint]

Normally I don't read Hermione but in this case she works well in her position, nice detail, and that ending *smooches

[amorette]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked her here:)

[_afterism]

omg, this has everything I could have hoped for and so much more! It's scorchingly hot, I absolutely love the prompts you choose and what you've done with them and oh, that ending! I especially love Hermione's struggle, and her awareness of what's happening but being utterly unable to resist, it's simply delicious. And art as well?! asdkajsadf I feel so spoiled, both pictures are so gorgeous and sexy and a perfect addition to the story. I can't stop staring at them!

Thank you so, so much! ♥!!

[amorette]

Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I wanted to give you something you would like, so I'm very pleased :D I loved your prompts, which were very inspiring, and totally fit my dub-con inclination with the mind control and the 'uses of Imperius around the home.'

Thank you so much!

[nearlyconscious]

Hot damn! This reminded me why I loved this fest so much. Dark femslash... how I've missed you...
The second drawing is incredibly enticing. I am such a huge fan of clover clamps!
Loved the twist at the end. When did Hermione stop resisting? The ambiguity and mindfuck is just what I love about this kind of fics. And your oh-so-vicious Narcissa is compelling. Kudos, Mystery Author!

[amorette]

Thank you much for the lovely comment!

[leontinabowie]

This was wonderful.

If he was to be the Wizarding world's prisoner, then this Mudblood would be Narcissa's. I loved that line. It just really summed up Narcissa and her reasons. I loved how cruel she was throughout, that's how I like it in a non-con Dark fic, rather than the mistress becoming romantic.

The ending was great too, and I love how you left it open so we can try and work out for ourselves why Hermione became like that.

Oh, and the art was amazing. I loved both, but I just really really adore Hermione's hair and dress in the first one :D

[amorette]

Aw thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it!

[josephinestone]

The content of this is a squick of mine, but I looked at the art anyway. I love Hermione's hair in the first one, and the ruffled dress. I like that she doesn't have a face-I'm not sure why, but I really liked the simplicity of it.

[amorette]

Aw yay, I'm so glad you liked the art!