New Fic

[darktigergirl]

OMG! It's been SOOOOO long! My computer hates me.....piece of crap....anyway, my idea for the sequel to 'Insanity' has left me...I'm trying REALLY hard to try and remember it! So until then, here is a nice Envy x Ed fic I thought up. This is the first chapter...hopefully...tell me if I should keep going! I'll call it....

Broken Destiny

One last thing

Comments

[koto_kokopelli]

Wow, never heard of a pirate-themed FMA fic series. This is going to be quite interesting.

If I may ask, is English your first language? I noticed quite a bit of grammatical errors. If you like, I'd be happy to beta it for you.

[darktigergirl]

Yes, English is my first language. Like I said, 'spur of the moment'. Beta it if you like.

[orochiko]

Oh my, excellent idea! I saw a fairly large number of errors, though. I could beta, as well.

[corbeauaura]

Continue, please? :D

You've cought me on my "pirate high".

*Just saw Pirates of the Carribean: Dead Man's Chest two days ago* XD;

[evilnflightless]

I found this very intertaining! You should definatly continue it. I would love to see where you have to go with further chapters and I love the whole FMA Pirates of the Carribean cross over. Hell, now I want to draw it! XD