Comments | darkspace99: Carry Me

darkspace99

Carry Me

Nov 22, 2007 01:56

Sorry for bombarding you all with fic but i needed to get this out. =)

Title: Carry Me
Pairing: Spike/Angel, Angel/Willow
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Joss is God. We are all God’s creations so obviously, the characters do not belong to me.
Summary: Post NFA. How do you go on alone? Angsty piece.

( Droplets fell upon his face... )

spangel

Comments 15

angelstoy November 22 2007, 07:33:39 UTC

That was so beautifully written, it totally made me cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

darkspace99 November 23 2007, 05:40:24 UTC

Awwwww, you cried??? *hurriedly brings you a box of tissues*

This was a sad story though our boys did get together in the end. I think all the work i've had to do lately has put me in an angsty mood. *sighs*

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darkspace99 November 23 2007, 05:51:09 UTC

Wow...That was DARK and haunting and extremely emotive. I loved it and the ending gave me shivers.

Thanks! That was exactly what I was trying to achieve.

I love dark Spangel - it always works better as far as I'm concerned, and you countered it beautifully with their love, which pushed them to such depths. Fantastic!

I love dark Spangel too. Their love, no matter if they're demons or humans, will always be dark. They'd always find a way to be together, despite the costs.

*nuzzles you in contentment*

lokifan November 22 2007, 17:39:12 UTC

Oh... beautiful but very sad. The ending got me right here. Xander was so twisted, it was very scary.

darkspace99 November 23 2007, 06:01:21 UTC

Xander was so twisted, it was very scary.

The end of BtVS gave them all hopeful endings but I always felt that what they've seen and done would've changed them a lot. And not necessarily for the better.

If Angel and/or Spike had ever Shanshued, Xander would not be happy. Especially since here, Angel is with Willow while Xander is all alone. In a way, Xander is the real victim of this story. Unlike Angel/Spike, he fought for the good fight without any special powers but he received nothing in return. All he got was a death sentence while the former demons got all the glory and happiness. It was bound to warp his mind. Only now, he could do something in revenge because Angel/Spike were no longer as invulnerable as they once were. What he did will definitely leave a mark on Angel and Spike.

velvetwhip November 22 2007, 22:55:50 UTC

Interesting look at what might have been. I feel so sorry for them all (except Xander).

Gabrielle

darkspace99 November 23 2007, 06:09:15 UTC

Thank you. What Xander did was very wrong but he himself was a victim. Not that it excuses what he did. But anyway, the important thing is that our boys ended up together in the end.

*kisses*

arcadii November 23 2007, 04:33:12 UTC

I enjoyed it, and I've never really liked Zander much, anyway. It leaves me with lots of questions though: Angels disappearance, his stalking Spike, his chilly body temp and effortless carrying of said blonde, are you alluding to Angel becoming a vampire again? If so, does that mean he was souless, and maybe responsible for Willow's death?

darkspace99 November 23 2007, 06:12:57 UTC

It leaves me with lots of questions though: Angels disappearance, his stalking Spike, his chilly body temp and effortless carrying of said blonde, are you alluding to Angel becoming a vampire again? If so, does that mean he was souless, and maybe responsible for Willow's death?

Hmmm...you might be on the right track! *grins evilly*

Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you like it!