The Pain of Betrayal

Jul 13, 2007 01:15

Title: The Boundaries of Love (4 ( Read more... )

spangel, the boundaries of love

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lilithbint July 13 2007, 08:41:15 UTC
Eeep...

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darkspace99 July 13 2007, 18:48:13 UTC
Hehe. I suspect that your eeep had something to do with the ending of this chapter...

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darkspace99 July 13 2007, 19:08:33 UTC
Well, I did figure I was due a cliffhanger ending for this chapter. I haven't done one of those in a while. *grins evilly ( ... )

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The Boundaries Of Love shay2 July 14 2007, 01:14:10 UTC
Me thinks Mina was a virgin. Slayers are young and she had been in a coma for a few years right?

Then again...seems like she knew how to give a blow-job (well Spike did anyway, but you know what I mean...)

I just love this story so much I never want the chapters to end. I read each section twice before moving on.

I am so looking forward to seeing this progress. What is the plan? What was in the vial? Where is Angel? He didn't seem to be in bed when Spike was having a nightmare. Lord know we don't need Angelus loose.

Then again...Angelus is just so much fun.

More Soon
Shay

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Re: The Boundaries Of Love darkspace99 July 14 2007, 04:10:28 UTC
Well, actually Mina isn't a virgin. She's 21 now and she was 17 when she fell into a coma, perhaps a bit young to be losing her virginity (well when you consider that kids nowadays sleep around when they're 13 or 14 then she's actually not too young). *sighs*

I just love this story so much I never want the chapters to end. I read each section twice before moving on.

*blushes* Do you really? Wow. Thank you. I'm glad you like it so much.

You will get the answers to some of your questions in the next chapter. It might give you some more questions, however. *grins evilly* The ending should tie up everything neatly.

*hugs*

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angelstoy July 15 2007, 17:13:01 UTC
You are an evil, evil woman to be leaving the story there like that!!!

(Will totally be squirming, in more ways then one, in my seat til you post more!!)

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darkspace99 July 15 2007, 20:18:12 UTC
Oops. Sorry for doing that. *coughs*Not*coughs* =)

I'll try not to leave you squirming for too long...

*kisses*

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shanmara July 15 2007, 21:48:50 UTC
You're evil, you know it. Plus I'm sure you love that.
At each new chapter, I'm wondering what you're going to add this time to make it even more intriguing... I'm never disappointed :)

Oh... and the vomit thing? Made me laugh in the middle of all this angsty mood! Angel's never cuter than when he's embarrassed :)

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darkspace99 July 16 2007, 21:42:05 UTC
Thank you. Of course, I'm evil. Hehe. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I try to make it interesting and different.

Yeah, the vomit thing was to be expected. Angel did drink himself to a coma. Add his nervousness and it's a combination for disaster. Not a very good impression on the girl that he likes. But Spike forgives him anyway.

Agrees with you about the Angel cuteness thing.

*hugs*

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