... wow. That's a sucker punch of a start! But I like the descriptions, even with the gore. And it makes one curious what exactly did happen... Poor Groove and First Aid... I wonder why they survived, normally, writers like to go for a gestalt bond being broken means the death for all of who where a part of it...
thank you! i think you're the only one who has read this! no clue-other than that those two will be needed. so, i'm gonna go with it being Primus's will. :) and, hopefully, this will include my OTP before it's over! =^.^=
thank you! Primus has always struck me as benevolent, and that's a major draw for me. i've never been able to trust a god who will protect you by smiting the shit out of your enemies-you never know when that god may decide it's YOUR turn. or those gods who are constantly on about how you should fear them. not my idea of a holy creator..*rolls eyes* i love writing Primus in-story, too, even if it IS an awfully deux ex machina cop-out, lol! oh yayz! i've gotten the next few parts done, and if my spine/hip/sciatic nerve will ever stop screaming, i'll get them polished and posted! thank you for sticking thru the gore-i promise it gets better!
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no clue-other than that those two will be needed. so, i'm gonna go with it being Primus's will. :)
and, hopefully, this will include my OTP before it's over! =^.^=
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I'll read on! I like your writing style, so don't think you can get rid of me that easily LOL
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oh yayz! i've gotten the next few parts done, and if my spine/hip/sciatic nerve will ever stop screaming, i'll get them polished and posted!
thank you for sticking thru the gore-i promise it gets better!
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