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Aug 22, 2005 01:05

How Did We Get To This Point ( Read more... )

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darksidewins August 23 2005, 03:17:12 UTC

thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you felt it!

avlyn_naturae August 22 2005, 06:07:51 UTC

Oh, very nice indeed. I like your style which leaves readers having to use their imagination just a bit.

darksidewins August 23 2005, 04:00:04 UTC

thanks! yes, i'm not really into a lot of graphic detail, not always sure it conveys the feeling - it depends. hopefully there was enough visual to get it all started!

anakin415 August 22 2005, 08:35:16 UTC

Bloddy hell. That I can seriously see from Haydens p o v. Absoultely brilliant.

darksidewins August 23 2005, 03:19:09 UTC

i seem to thinking a lot about hayden's pov these days! what is behind those eyes?! thank you so much! for reading and liking...

selfinduced August 22 2005, 15:13:39 UTC

jesusfuck.

watch the tense/POV changes, but guh. bloody brilliant otherwise.

fromperdition August 22 2005, 19:30:45 UTC

Wow, that was really beautiful, and sad and I loved it!