Fic: Finite Erasure (Logan/Veronica) Hard R - NC-17 (2/?)

[synful_trixxie]

Title: Finite Erasure
Author: synful_trixxPairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, Keith, Wallace

Comments

[cinaya19]

Yes! First comment!!

Although I don't know if it counts since I was talking to you when you posted.

Anyway, I love this story. Thinking of Logan and Keith mourning together...*tries not to cry*

I can't wait to see the next part up *grin*

[synful_trixxie]

LOL

You little brat! You know what happens next! *grins*

*pats you*

I? am going to make you cry. Alot. *evil look*

[jen_knee_suu]

Oh my lord, Trixx. I seriously think you just killed me dead. This chapter..so freakin amazing. I love the relationship between Logan and Keith. Logan finally has someone to look up to...someone he could call a father figure. Never have I cried this freakin much during a fic. This chapter was amazing.
I can't wait for the next. To see Keith and Logan's reactions to what Veronica has been through. To hear more details of what she went through. You are an amazing writer! I love reading your stuff...dark or not!

[synful_trixxie]

*blush*

*blushes more*

um... HI!

Next part is not dark. *G* It's a flashback to the week before the crash. *beams* Which will kill.you.ded.

[jen_knee_suu]

It seems lots of things have been killin me ded lately! I can't wait!!

[synful_trixxie]

We're working on it. Between Gert and I, you should be killed really ded. *G*

[gt_bunny]

I love that you can make me cry and have me still feel like it's a good thing! Because this is so angsty! I love it.

And I love how you've got Logan and Keith bonding and being all father/son together. Logan needs a good father role model.

Fantastic. Can't wait for more!

[synful_trixxie]

Thank you so much for reading! more soon!

[rowanceleste]

God, this is amazing. I can absolutely feel the guilt that Logan and Keith must be feeling because they 'gave up too soon' even though they thought Veronica was dead. There's also that desperate hope that it is Veronica and it's not a mistake and the fear that she's not going to be the same Veronica, because God knows what happened to her and they hope their Veronica will be in there somewhere. I hope she doesn't blame them for not saving her, but I can also see the need to blame at first before she starts to cope with what happened to her. I sounds like the FBI agent is developing feelings or an interest in Veronica, but I also liked that it seemed that Veronica is projecting that blankness, but she's hiding herself inside until it's safe to come out. She knows her name and she recognized her Dad's name so she's in there, but it was probably easier to play possum the past three years, especially when escape had seemed or was proven impossible.

[synful_trixxie]

Thank you so much for commenting! I had this big long comment in response and lj ate it. *pouts*

Thank you for telling me what you actually liked.

Please remember that Veronica has been drugged repeatedly over the past 3 years... and it's not so much that she's playing possum... but more that she's detached herself from her surroundings. Detached herself in order to survive.

[rowanceleste]

I can absolutely see that..>I forgot about the whole opium thing...It makes sense that it makes her detached, etc...I'm just trying to hold onto the reassurance that Keith's 'bad-ass action figure' daughter is in there somewhere and while it won't be easy or quick for her to come back and she'll never ever be completely the same girl, she can come close enough to be happy and live her life and love and share with her family (including Wallace&Logan), etc..

[synful_trixxie]

I'll say again... there's a semi happy ending *G*

Thank you again for reading and commenting!

[spikeshunny]

Oh wow.

Cannot wait for an update bleedin ell. Totally sucked me in this chapter.

[synful_trixxie]

LOL! Thank you so much! More soon... hopefully. *G* I'm a little behind on my word count so it might be a few days.

I only post when I get ahead.